My first Avatar. Feedback please?

[snorsorbet]

The picture looks generally bulky, try picking out more detailed shadows with a smaller brush (or increase the size of the image just to shrink it again). I like the fire, it looks very supernatural.

If you want to, you can also try to make the pose better. Right now it looks like he is about to fall over due to the amount of weight on his front

Also, welcome to the forums