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08-06-2010, 12:55 PM
(This post was last modified: 08-06-2010, 01:03 PM by oliveryungo.)
@Bamboori- actually, I get a lot of lines from books. Not that I searched them up, but some things stick in your head.
@Alblaka- Patience is a virtue (although I can't say that since I'm from Hong Kong). I only wrote this fast due to popular demand.
Offtopic- @Alblaka's sig- you forgot to include 'ever' at teh end XD
Anyway, this story is in fact a simple 'trusted guy goes mad, but is actually controlled by someone else'. I just juiced it up a bit XD
I plan to do something on the Eggpire and Duckpire conflict, but it'll probably be way shorter. Unless a wave of inspiration comes, which is what happened when I decided to write this story.
Any more comments on improving (DONT say anything about character development)?
I made a poll because I got bored
@Alblaka- Patience is a virtue (although I can't say that since I'm from Hong Kong). I only wrote this fast due to popular demand.
Offtopic- @Alblaka's sig- you forgot to include 'ever' at teh end XD
Anyway, this story is in fact a simple 'trusted guy goes mad, but is actually controlled by someone else'. I just juiced it up a bit XD
I plan to do something on the Eggpire and Duckpire conflict, but it'll probably be way shorter. Unless a wave of inspiration comes, which is what happened when I decided to write this story.
Any more comments on improving (DONT say anything about character development)?
I made a poll because I got bored
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