11-05-2008, 03:26 PM
You could post 2 chapter per week :/
Cause it's bad to wait sooooo much for a good story
Cause it's bad to wait sooooo much for a good story
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G4F Chronicles II: The LF Empire (Season Two)
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11-05-2008, 03:26 PM
You could post 2 chapter per week :/
Cause it's bad to wait sooooo much for a good story
11-05-2008, 04:01 PM
I love you guys' enthusiasm. Well there are only 6 chapters left. So this Friday and the final Fridays to come will be double features. How's that?
Escape is a two-syllable word that grants temporary peace in the present to a future victim.
11-05-2008, 04:13 PM
Actually is better
EDIT: Bad news folks. I've lost my flash drive which had my G4FCII word file on it. I didn't make a backup copy like an idiot so I'm currently looking for it and when I find it I'll get the chapters too you. Otherwise I'll have to rewrite everything which will be a pain.
Once again I apologize for this. It's just not been a good week for me.
Escape is a two-syllable word that grants temporary peace in the present to a future victim.
11-07-2008, 09:31 PM
And I was going to offer have a backup of your story...
but i imagined that you wouldn't let it... :/
11-09-2008, 03:32 AM
Since I lost my original chapters I have had to rewrite everything. I didn't want to have you all waiting any longer so I decided to release chapter fifteen now. Hope you all enjoy it and all it's lateness. XD
Chapter Fifteen
The Dark Hunter hovered above in the skies glaring down on the ones who opposed him. Marshall and Cirno stood in front, Zabobula and MH stood not too far behind them, and BP, Drahcir, and Haywire stood near Robo who was slowly rising up from the ground. “Come!” Evil Sonidow taunted. “All of you.” Marshall and Cirno leapt into the sky, with MH and Zabobula following closely behind. Drahcir was about to enter the fray but Haywire stopped him. “No wait, Drahcir!” Haywire yelled catching his attention. “What?!” Drahcir yelled back in frustration. “I know you want to fight him,” Haywire began, “but it is not time yet.” “I have no time to wait,” Drahcir said. “I have waited long enough trying to find my brother’s killer and he is right there!” “Please, for all of our sake,” Haywire started, “just wait. We need to begin the process of opening the portal to the other realm. Sonidow already knows about it so once he sees it, he will automatically charge after us.” “Do what he says,” Blue-Phoenix agreed. Haywire noticed a sudden change and turned around to see Robo on top of a large pile of rubble, holding up his hands. The G4Forian leader had already begun the process. “You two,” Haywire called to BP and Drahcir, “come with me.” The two Imperial Generals, Marshall and Cirno, charged full-speed at Evil Sonidow who waited above. Marshall unleashed a large green vine-like whip from underneath his sleeve and Cirno materialized his large staff. The Dark Hunter smirked for a small moment, and without another moment’s notice, unleashed a powerful dome of electricity upon his sibling rivals. Marshall and Cirno were entangled in the dome’s electrical grip. The two Imperial Generals retracted from the skies and the Red Stickman and the Empire’s Leader, MH, charged in ahead. Evil Sonidow took the offensive and charged them. With rage shining in his eyes and fists glowing bright with his red energy, the Red Stickman charged at the Dark Hunter with enough fury to disturb the gods. MH kept his distance from the Stickman as he knew how dangerous his power could be at times. “Come then Stickman!” Evil Sonidow shouted with his gleaming sword in both hands. Zabobula launched a massive right hand Sonidow’s way which missed by the longest of distances. Not only had the Dark Hunter become stronger, he had gained massive agility throwing the Stickman off course and off guard. Evil Sonidow spawned behind the baffled Stickman and bashed him across the head with his blade’s hilt sending him flying down into the rubble of the main building. He landed with a loud crash. MH-Razen was now up for the task. The Empire’s leader unsheathed his double-bladed sword and pointed it at Sonidow signaling for a duel. Sonidow signaled his acceptation with his sword by pointing it up. The two lunged at each other and they began their duel in the skies. Evil Sonidow’s skill with the blade was a lot for the Empire’s leader to handle for his skill was based on old teachings. “You should give up now, Razen,” Evil Sonidow said as their blades clashed into each other. “You cannot defeat me and you know it.” “That might be true,” MH began, “but if I die, I’m dragging you down to Hell with me!” “I don’t plan on going there anytime soon,” Evil Sonidow smirked as he broke off their blades’ power struggle. He dealt him a powerful kick to the abdomen which knocked MH back a ways. As soon as MH recovered, Sonidow had already dashed behind him having left no sign of his movement. Sonidow was going in for the kill when, Cirno, dashed in to the rescue. Cirno’s staff knocked Sonidow’s blade out of its killing direction. MH backed away from the two. “I won’t let you destroy this Empire!” Cirno said. “You cannot stop me brother!” Evil Sonidow said. “You never were the strongest of us and you never will be.” “I may not have been as strong as you and the others,” Cirno began, “but that’s not where my power lies.” “You have no power,” Sonidow accused. “We all have the same power,” Cirno said, “You use yours for the wrong reasons and that’s why you will not win. I will not let you win!” “You have no choice in the matter!” Evil Sonidow roared. The two brothers’ conflict was growing by the second and their energies began radiating off from each other in the form of their own separate auras. Evil Sonidow’s was of a dark purple and Cirno’s was a bright blue. “You have no strong will to fight,” Evil Sonidow began, “You cannot hope to defeat me.” “That’s where you’re wrong,” Cirno responded. “Our powers are based off our personal will. But you wouldn’t know that because you have soiled your powers with evil which clouds your real judgment. So you don’t know what I am fully capable of.” Cirno’s staff began glowing a bright yellow as it continued to clash with Sonidow’s blade. The Imperial General’s power began growing and it showed as the power struggle began leaning more to his side. Evil Sonidow was puzzled and shocked at the power his brother was displaying. “What’s this?” Evil Sonidow asked out loud. Cirno smiled and said, “My true power!” Cirno broke off their weapon clash and returned fire with a wide swing of his staff, hacking off the top part of Sonidow’s blade. The Dark Hunter was weaponless and off-guard. Cirno went in for the charge and pressed his hand against Sonidow’s chest and released a large amount of energy from his hands. In one loud roar, Cirno let out a large wave of energy on his brother sending him flying through the skies and out of the castle area. The blast crashed into a plain field area not too far from the castle, with Sonidow in it. Cirno quickly dropped from the sky having used up a large amount of his energy. He landed outside the castle near the east wall. Marshall ran out to him to reassure him. “You did well Cirno,” Marshall congratulated. Cirno panted heavily as he replied, “It…was…not enough.” ~
The Empire’s soldiers began carving up the rest of what remained of the Dark Rebellion soldiers. Paddy and Lauli continued to lead the troops as they hacked and plowed their way through their quickly depleting army. Alec, Dome, and Handertaker were now getting more kills as Paddy decided to let some live a little longer for them to slay. “Now this is more like it!” Alec said as he took out a soldier retreating from the scene with a flung dagger. The last soldiers stood quivering in their final moments. Paddy and Lauli made quick work of them and finally…it was over. The Empire’s soldiers rose their weapons in the sky and let out a large hooray celebrating their victory. Alec collapsed onto the ground letting out a large sigh of relief. Dome and Handertaker stood up smiling as the battle had finally ended. “Oh that was it? Paddy said. “Don’t give me that,” Lauli said. “You know you are extremely tired because I am.” “Hah!” Paddy yelled. “I’m not tired.” “Oh you’re tired,” Lauli said. “You just choose not to show it.” Paddy sheathed his blades. “Heh, maybe you’re right. But not really.” Lauli couldn’t help but laugh at his messmate’s antics. Don Giovanni, Sinow, and King looked at their soldiers below from the south wall. “It’s finally over,” King said. “Oh it is far from over,” Don said. King turned to see his fellow General looking at something in the skies above. ~
Noir was sent into the trunk of a tree from a heavy blow by Lukas. The Dark Angel was becoming more and more puzzled as their fight dragged on. “Why is this happening?” Noir asked himself. “This fight should have been over a long time ago. Why can’t I defeat him?” Noir’s puzzled look on his face caught Lukas’s eye. “So you’re beginning to understand. You cannot defeat me, Noir.” “I refuse to believe that I will lose to the likes of you,” Noir said with his pride feeling questioned. “You should accept it,” Lukas responded, “You were predestined to lose the moment you joined with the Dark Rebellion.” Noir listened to his words very carefully and realized a truth. “I see, now I understand. It was all his doing. He set this up.” “Yes, now you see,” Lukas started. “Sonidow knew that your idea of “Justice” would get in the way of our plans. That’s why I was assigned as your replacement. He wanted someone of skills near to or on par with your own to carry out the mission.” The feeling of betrayal grasped Noir’s heart and filled it with anger. The Dark Angel began gritting his teeth and clinching his fists so tight that blood began to spill. Blood had began trickling from his forehead from where Lukas dealt him a hefty blow but it did not distract him. He rose up from his crouched position on the tree trunk and began staggering towards Lukas. In the midst of his stroll, he immediately stopped and began quivering violently. “What are you up to now?” Lukas asked. “You must realize that whatever you do, you can’t defeat me.” “Tell me, Lukas,” Noir asked with a darker voice, “Do you know what Dark Justice is?” Lukas was about to reply when Noir shot him a cold stare the likes of which he had never seen. His eyes had become darker than the deepest of abysses. He lowered his head and his long white hair began growing. His canines began extending and he began snarling in the process. Noir’s hands also expanded as well as the nails in his fingers to sharper lengths. Veins began popping out of his forehead and other visible areas of his skin. Noir’s replacement was quite shaken by this unusual transformation and began seeing black feathers falling from the sky. He looked at Noir again and instantly saw two large black wings extend from his back! The Dark Angel let out a loud cry shooting his fists into the sky and bringing them down hard on the ground creating a large tremor shaking the foundations of his replacement. The Dark Angel looked at his adversary and his adversary looked back. Lukas had took too long to notice the sword that had materialized during Noir’s transformation. By the time he had saw the blade, it was too late. Noir had already run clean threw him. “Wh-what?!” Lukas managed to utter out the only word he could before slumping over on the ground, motionless. Noir swiped his sword removing the blood from it and sheathed it. He looked back at the lifeless corpse, returning back to his regular form in the process. “That is Dark Justice.”
Escape is a two-syllable word that grants temporary peace in the present to a future victim.
11-09-2008, 05:59 AM
This is Dark Awesome!
Waiitng for next one
11-09-2008, 07:06 AM
(This post was last modified: 11-09-2008, 07:06 AM by snorsorbet.)
Yaaay! I wonder what purpose I havein the story, except watching Noir fight...
EDIT: Sorry meant justice XD
11-09-2008, 08:18 AM
yeah really great chapter
11-09-2008, 09:18 AM
This is great!
(I just hope i´ll fight sometime soon too...)
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