sumthing like arT or something

[Jahvansi]

u didnt. I like it^^


@^ defenitly a matured version of him, look at his whole face.


edit: thats the sprite

[Gespenst]

[MnM]

Looks neat! However there are few corrections to be made
1) Her right hand wrist is big. Maybe you need to add the projecting bone signifying the joints.
2) Her outer-garment(Blue) . In that the buttoning points are way too left. Shift it kind of 5-8 pixels to right
3) The pose could look complete if you place her left hand on her left thigh. That way it will look more natural
4) The face looks a bit scary with the eyes, nose and mouth making no relation to the whole face. You will have to place them even more accurately

All-in-all good one

[Gespenst]

Thank you but here comes excuse comment
It's a sketchy version, just wanned to have her in more realistic porportions, not cartoony one.

og version


1. Don't know about her wrist, I never made good wrist also :P
2. Agree, they could, maybe because it was was drawn first before I finished with the whole garment(blue).
3. I think that it would make her look too much touchy which could lead to the theory that she want to get some attention from the opposite sex. I decided to hide her other arm/hand and to have a mystery. Maybe she is holding some kind of weapon like knife :P But thanks for pointing that Might redo the whole version when I get home
4. Well, she is a tomboy I understand that she is not the top noch girl but she is a girl, atleast

[MnM]

Okay but the face needs to be worked on..The forehead is way too large. That gives it an odd look. Other than that no issues i hope

[A-Man]

It also looks like she's wearing a hair piece with the bold line at where the hair and the forehead meet.

[Gespenst]

Okay but the face needs to be worked on..The forehead is way too large. That gives it an odd look. Other than that no issues i hope

Err, are we going for a beauty standarts? Forehead can be big as hell is hot.

It also looks like she's wearing a hair piece with the bold line at where the hair and the forehead meet.

please explain that

[A-Man]

This bold line makes it seem like there is a gap between the hair and the head. It's as if she's bald and is wears a wig of some sort.

[Gad]

Guys. I personally find it great. Its up all to the style of drawing. All manga creatures are pretty much messed if its up to head proportions. Dont overdo the critics

[Jahvansi]

agree with gad.

style of the first cartonny version is kinda disneyish, and I like it.