GuestEX's Sprites

[Dr. Time]

Looks great.
You seem to have practice in doing this.
Love the Axe

[GuestEX]

Do you have already some experience with pc drawing?!
This is absolutely great sprite for "begginer".
I like mantles green color and his combination with light green eyes and grey/dark green color of armour!
Keep it up. btw, What are you using for drawing?

Hey Marko

I'm glad you like my sprite
Yes I have some experience in drawing, particularly in analog drawing.
I'm using Photoshop CS6(Much easier than other graphic programmes) and a graphic tablet.

Have a nice day
GuestEX

[GuestEX]

made a new one :3
Thanks for supporting me guys

special thanks to _mundvoll for his hair tutorial

[Marko pro]

Look cartoonish..That's bad 'nd good..more bad :/
I like hair alot.
Take yourself more time for sprite, just experimenting with different methods and styles.

[drako]

made a new one :3
Thanks for supporting me guys

special thanks to _mundvoll for his hair tutorial

You need to learn more about proportions. When it comes to shading you already have basic ideas. But, it seems that you are not much used to proportions. You can find some tutorials based on proportions in this very forum. You can also use google for proportions only when you are finished searching in this forum. Link for tutorial section:-http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/forum-16.html

[GuestEX]

made a new one :3
Thanks for supporting me guys

special thanks to _mundvoll for his hair tutorial

You need to learn more about proportions. When it comes to shading you already have basic ideas. But, it seems that you are not much used to proportions. You can find some tutorials based on proportions in this very forum. You can also use google for proportions only when you are finished searching in this forum. Link for tutorial section:-http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/forum-16.html

which part of his body looks wierd, i think its fine because i used deep as draft.

[drako]

which part of his body looks wierd, i think its fine because i used deep as draft.

I know you used Deep as a draft. When it comes to weird parts I guess you can make it out yourself. But, if you want me to tell you, then:-
1) His stomach is just bulging out.
2) His waist seems narrow.
3) His left arm(from sprite's point of view) is too folded to make it look like elbow.
4) Boots are huge in comparison to narrow legs.(the very reason it looks cartoonish)
When you use lf2 sprites as a base they definitely give a nice base and done proportions but when you make changes in it then also you require the knowledge of proportion to make it appealing. Otherwise, it won't look the good you want to make it.

[GuestEX]

which part of his body looks wierd, i think its fine because i used deep as draft.

I know you used Deep as a draft. When it comes to weird parts I guess you can make it out yourself. But, if you want me to tell you, then:-
1) His stomach is just bulging out.
2) His waist seems narrow.
3) His left arm(from sprite's point of view) is too folded to make it look like elbow.
4) Boots are huge in comparison to narrow legs.(the very reason it looks cartoonish)
When you use lf2 sprites as a base they definitely give a nice base and done proportions but when you make changes in it then also you require the knowledge of proportion to make it appealing. Otherwise, it won't look the good you want to make it.

here's my upgrading. I hope it satisfy your suggestions for improvement.

I also made him much more muscular.

[Marko pro]

to be specific

[GuestEX]

to be specific

means i should add more contrast :3