sumthing like arT or something

[Monolanier]

Looking nice, I see that you totally got the DBZ-proportions down. Yet, it feels like when you try to deviate a bit from there, the anatomy gets a bit wonky. For example, the first one seems to have really small legs and feet compared to the torso. The third one looks much better in terms of proportions, even though I do think his left shoulder is a bit exaggerated.

Then again, I'm complaining on a pretty high level. Overall, it's quite nice

Thank you for your feedback.

Tried my best while remembering DBZ style, it helped me a lot when I looked at manga version but still could not managed to mimic it perfectly.
Yeah, that one is kind a ruined. I remember my teacher saying "always step away and look at your drawings from a distance".
His shoulder do look exaggerated. I want big shoulders for myself, maybe thats why I drew them like that

I'd say that your complains will help me in the future. I will make note to self and will try to remember those detail flaws.

Thank you again Blue Phoenix!

[Monolanier]

Mecha

colors

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[Monolanier]

Ohh, look at his forearm

[Bamboori]

aw man.
did you not realize it soon enough?
rest of the drawing looks pretty dope though.

[Monolanier]

aw man.
did you not realize it soon enough?
rest of the drawing looks pretty dope though.

Indeed :/
tho I can scan it and fix it if I want to color it

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[Monolanier]

Some Jan's designs.


And some colors

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[Monolanier]

Black gokus head was also way off but I had to edit it too