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Jahvansi's sprites (Arcane)
Used my newest sprite base? Looks similar.
His pants bit remind of doll.
You know, croach and then legs which can move only backwards and forward
also, idk about arms, looks strange, like his muscles would be like body builder or on steroids. I mean they are so clear to see even trought his outfit
upper leg part, maybe try to change that? It looks like its made out of some round thing. Also, thats my taste.
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yes i did, i loved that sprite ;>
also, i took lots of apoc sprites as reference, mainly tried his pants shading, he always shaded the upper leg part like that, its kinda hard for me tho.
thx for comment, im still practicing, got some freetime now so im willing to improve^^
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Well, I also love apoc sprites. But I try to develop my own style,
sometimes I juse base from his sprites, but If you will be trying to copy other person style, you will just waist your time and gona give yourself a headache. Its like trying to copy little fighter style which has no style which co makes it look interesting (talking about outfit)
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ya but when i want to improve my spriting skills i always try to learn some stuff by analysing great spriters stuff^^

anyway, is there anything wrong with that sprite?

[Image: Lhru3rm.png]
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Thanks given by: Monolanier , ossiee , Bla bla bla 44
hmn idk, I beter like when you do such thing like this [Image: vl3g4Qq.png]
[Image: aUBQfKl.gif]
idk but some of your sprites is bit too much blurry
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yeah kay, but also in this sprite?

i wanna practice sheeting a bit with it, so point out flaws before im half done already pls^^

[Image: HBQGZZQ.gif]
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dunno, maybe more contrast in his skin?

also, you should get rid of that green line on his torso when he is breathing and going up
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yes 200% test

[Image: dOcdQjQ.png]

anything else?

@mono: take a look at your 13thzone msg inbox ;)
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Thanks given by: Monolanier , Marko
If you want to make it perfect, remove a pixel from down of his left shoe.
;)

EDIT: The previous page had only EXG9 and mundvoll's posts :p
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Maybe a little more like this:
[Image: fixz.png]
More contrast, fixed eyes, made his chest more visible by removing 2 pixels above his legs.

EDIT: Also it could be better if you connected the light on his pants from the both legs.
[Image: fixe.png]
[Image: double-jump-YinYin-base-1.gif]
This is an inspiration from:
-YinYin's Character Development guide, to be more specific i took one of those bases.
-Urban Rivals' clan Skeelz, I took their uniform
I hope it's good. ^^
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