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Jahvansi's sprites (Arcane)
hmn idk, I beter like when you do such thing like this [Image: vl3g4Qq.png]
[Image: aUBQfKl.gif]
idk but some of your sprites is bit too much blurry
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yeah kay, but also in this sprite?

i wanna practice sheeting a bit with it, so point out flaws before im half done already pls^^

[Image: HBQGZZQ.gif]
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dunno, maybe more contrast in his skin?

also, you should get rid of that green line on his torso when he is breathing and going up
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yes 200% test

[Image: dOcdQjQ.png]

anything else?

@mono: take a look at your 13thzone msg inbox ;)
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If you want to make it perfect, remove a pixel from down of his left shoe.
;)

EDIT: The previous page had only EXG9 and mundvoll's posts :p
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Maybe a little more like this:
[Image: fixz.png]
More contrast, fixed eyes, made his chest more visible by removing 2 pixels above his legs.

EDIT: Also it could be better if you connected the light on his pants from the both legs.
[Image: fixe.png]
[Image: double-jump-YinYin-base-1.gif]
This is an inspiration from:
-YinYin's Character Development guide, to be more specific i took one of those bases.
-Urban Rivals' clan Skeelz, I took their uniform
I hope it's good. ^^
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can i see the full-size version you worked on? i can give a better opinion about it then.
right now, maybe the hair needs some work and face.
[sig placeholder until my new sig is finished]
should totally allow people to be all trolley on their birthday :D
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wow, thx for all those comments :)
well, i tried to fix some stuff, ill just go with this now:

[Image: EAKTvic.gif]


also, here is big: [Image: LsXwtz2.png]
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it looks like you do not spent much time on big sprite, I mean about shading, its looks flat, and hair, maybe more detailed?
But why are you using blury brush?
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well i just wanted to keep it simple as i want to sheet it, also i didnt put much details as i thought they get lost with resizing anyway...
blury brush? what u mean with that? i use standard ps brush as i always do when i sprite ._.
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