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New Sprite(s) - XLittlebob252
First of all the head is small then the arms and body are small compere to the legs and practise more on the face looks to simple.
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well beacause i want to help at avatar mod i practice now so i can make the sprites really good and here is a a test from matt's spriting tutorial.
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Here's a little list of what you can improve:
  • crotch of pants is rather low
  • char's left arm is sticking out too much
  • the upside-down-V-like shape of the shirt should be moved rightwards
  • char's right shoe is not well-proportioned
  • middle of the hair is pretty flat
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ok i think i fixed
but i didint understand the middle of the hair flat...
i fixed all but the hair.
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ok dude ireally gotta give u credit for this one. u really have improved alot. u know well shading and face spriting. looks like u ve been looking at some tuts lately. have no complaints about the sprite just give him an ear that all.
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nah the ear hides behind the hair.
so he has a ear just under the hair.
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he could really be a good char for lf2
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oh dude you've really improved but he seems to be a bit fat make him a little thin.
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is this better?
and im working now a progress so i might not making any sprites in the near future
because i working on a char (well trieng).
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Well he looks like his pants are down and the boddy is to big for the hands.
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