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I like the overall design of the character, but the face does not seem to fit with the rest of the body, color wise. (and the face is still missing an ear). The muscles look pretty good as well. Also the sprite seems to have a skirt which expands past the red coat. You might want to fix that part up as well. Overall nice job though.
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hmm let me see..
uper body davis?? made jacket a bit longer lower body bat maybe recoloured pants??
like the hair but his other eye seems somebody punched him. fix it
like the body base nice
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03-26-2009, 10:34 AM
(This post was last modified: 03-26-2009, 10:35 AM by Alectric.)
hey not too bad, just this:
the char is a little bit plain, but you dont have to fix that up.
the hair is good, but you need to put some behind his head too, next to his ear for it to be more all-round even
the pants look a bit high, and a bit tight.
well done on the face and shading, and nice hair detail.
nice char though, obvious davis base :P
i want to see you make some of these sprite into chars!
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all in all it looks good i just think the eyes r 2 near to each other, but how i said: the others for example the muscles on his body looks very good
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