[Char] Altair The Assassin...

[jason]

It looks fine except the chest part is still at his chest lol, and his hood should cover his face like this because it looks like the right part of the hood is overlapping
http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/4471/al...ecover.png

[XLittlebob252]

look whats different:




look you kept a little outline and the shading bad and did some bad stuff but i fixed look.

[Angel_Adam]

ok,how about this???
hope its covered enough...

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man,it looks like ice cream..ill keep mine..

[lf2TimmE1]

@xlittlebob: wtf....adams version looks WAYS better

[Angel_Adam]

i know,he said that mine is brown..

[chase123]

the greatest version is of Angel_Adam because it looks very cool the one that XLittlebob252 made does not look
very good and the version jason made is also good but not better then Angel_Adam's version.

[XLittlebob252]

i did my version in 1 minute...

maybe ill fix my version.

[Angel_Adam]

1,no the char that is great doesnt take 1 min..it takes more..
just take your time and relax...

[jason]

Yeah, mine I did it quick and with no blur and yes Angel_Adam's is better than mine. Some improvements that littlebob had that were good was he showed more of the red sash at his belt and that his clothes are more white; which in my opinion looks better. Angel_Adam yours is very good but you could lighten the color of his clothes to a very close to white gray and show more of his sash. His hood also has too many wrinkles in spots that make it look less realistic. There should be no wrinkles on the top part of his hood because gravity should be flattening it. He has a shoulder pad where the straps connect with knives on it and well here is a pic updated from yours of my depiction of him.

[XLittlebob252]

i marked in green what you did to much and maybe low a bit: