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made in paint? way to much simple.. not intersting.
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(09-15-2013, 08:27 PM)Marko Wrote:  made in paint? way to much simple.. not intersting.
yes, ms paint and mouse.
Jajajaja
maybe its supposed to be simple? Duhh
make something better
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Made a new logo today, it feels kinda "busy" and not as simplified as I would have liked
but its the best I can come up with for now, thoughts on how to improve it?
The right side is just to show u what its supposed to represent: "BizarreHare"
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The problem i believe is that there are too many details at the edges of logo, so you end up looking at everything except in the middle where i guess all the attention should be at.
What i would do in your place, i would simplify B and H as much as i could, (for example that "dot" at the bottom of H is an unnecessary detail, although i really lke that look. Also, would perhapse make lines a bit smoother.)
Plus i would somehow try to emphasize the rabbit in the middle. Either by making it bigger, or, idk, making additional tinny, white outlines around its shape.
Maybe i would keep that messy look of B and H, but would make outlines on the rabbit perfectly smooth.

Btw, the problem, i am refering to, is not the problem at all imo. I like the design.

EDIT: On the second look, ears bug me the most. They are not rabbit like..
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Greeeeat! I'm very impressed.

First of all - I disagree with Marko. I think letters are great and they are adding a special character to the logo.
The dot might be unnecessary tho, as Marko said, but it's not a that messy. I'd say you can keep it.

What i'd recommend to do is to make the rabbit more visable. I probably woudln't have guessed it's a rabbit if I didn't know. Also the line between the ears might be kinda confusing, some might read it as an "I" letter.

A rough proposition of changes:
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Well, put that way letters don't seem to be problem at all (although you did make lines smoother as i suggested it), but this is essentially what i was saying: "Make the rabbit more visible" in a way.
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