Luti's Sprites

[LutiChris]

luti...so whut do u think? :P

[MnM]

I think this luti is completely not like original luti ( U ) . The shading style, design-wise, its nice. But, i don't feel so good about his left foot and his right hand fingers. Its totally captivating. I want to ask a request, revamp ur kert teh uber ninja.

[LutiChris]

tablet gives out different hues...tried my best to bring out those main 2 colors
i also wanted a new style originally i was gonna sprite this dude i made...but half way i realized that his design would suit Luti better...imo...i had another design (+zipper and extra grey shirt new hair style)
but i sorta liked this design just to freshen it up...because originally it was simple
barely changed much other than adding yellow linings...how do i improve on him then?

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and yea...ok i'll see whut i can do 'bout kert

[LutiChris]

kay....kinda failed @ LF proportions...

V) hehe...nuts!

[Silverthorn]

Yeh, you went nuts with the perspective. Keep the legs the same size; arms are okay as the discrepancy isn't that obvious. Face + hair and the shading in general is great, though!

[MnM]

I like the way u drew his shirt's torn parts and also i like his pants. Good job. But, this one looks certainly crappy than other sprites :P .

[LutiChris]

Nia (i noticed she's pretty tall when i originally sprited her)
edited...so...what do u think?

[MnM]

Well, I think I saw her in ur web cam. (lol ) Anyways , Her feet is kinda duckish . her legs below the knees are bulging. ( Maybe all these are to me only. ) . Other than that, I like her cloths and her hands pretty much .

[snorsorbet]

Her dress and hair both look kind of flat, I can't spot the direction of the light.

I like the colour palette, not much to say about that

[Alectric]

Her feet is kinda duckish

I totally do not mind

The only thing i have a slight concern about is the shape of her head. It seems kinda like an oval slanted to the left. This just might be my vision starting to inevitably fail so soon on me, so no one else sees it, completely disregard this comment :P
I would like to demonstrate what i mean, but laziness, the hideous arch demon that it is, has taken me hostage and is asking for a high ransom that no one can surely pay.
HELP.

Everything else looks fine on that sprite, though her calves look massive, but again, my vision is disintegrating as i type this. sigsjklfjds

Dear reader: all hints of vision loss and arch demon captures have been a RUSE! All advice/information should be disregarded IMMEDIATELY.

Silverthorn edited this post 04-06-2011 10:07 AM because:

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