~Davis60's sprites~

[Dominate]

i dont belive my eyes your no humn is it really true that you didi this you went this to
wow as i said if you really sprited that all by yourself then you have im proved a lot
by the way the hair shading is wrong and the other shdings are not enough
(i wrote a lot didnt I)

[InPhiKnight]

Actually, I tried to sprite big and then compress it, first time. Before I sprited @ 79x79 but I did this in 250x250 and then resized it!
Thanks.

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New::XD:
Special thanks to JustMe's spritetutorial and others. I was reading tutorials and practicing sprite for 2 hours.

[Marko pro]

Well, thats are nice sprites..
You still need to learn alot about 3D propotionallity.

Keep up with sprinting.

[InPhiKnight]

Davis Revamp
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First time I have made a sprite using GIMP. All my before sprites were made in MS Paint.
So, How is he?

[NewToTheEra]

pent shading well
shirt shading normal
full hand shape really bad

[Marko pro]

-Skin is lack of contrast!
-Pants, They should be "baggy" but is okay if you wanted something new in "Davis look".
-You should check pf's tut about spriting in bigger format than 79/79 if tutorial is still there.
The point is don't make lot of small details 'cuz you lose them when you resize into normal(79/79). I am talking about those white tapes (also t-shirt) or whatever that is. So in future, in sprites like this, make much thicker line.
-I like hair. You made thick hair line.^^
-Jacket. I can't figure out problem in full. It has "plastic look", i think 'cuz these the lightest color of blue. Remove that.
-Shoes is lack of contrast too.

Waiting for new sprite. ;D

[drako]

Basically you need to put more contrast on hair shading and also on arms. You need to shape his hair properly, make those spikes pointed. Shade face, boots and chest to make it better. Keep on spriting with gimp the more you sprite the more you get better at it.

[InPhiKnight]

New one

[InPhiKnight]

Friese

[Marko pro]

Lack of contrast colors on skin..(Why does everyone make mistakes "lack of contrast colors on the skin?" , why always skin? ) :P
I like this hairstyle..
About shading on Torso and Pant.. They looking good.. but there have to be two parts.. Shade-Highlights area (for example shoes in your sprite)
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This is how i would make t&p:
-1 minutes work
Looks sucks.. because i overdo it for you so you can easily see my point...(and then destroyed details - reason why is sucks)
There are two areas.. shade-highlights this also is 3d problem which i mentioned earlier...you pm-ed me about, remember?
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also Mine's sprites are perfect example - Can i get permission to use your sprite as example, Me'n'mine??

keep up spriting.. and i love your char haha.