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Brother and Sister
Part 2

"How is that even possible, you are like 16 and I'm only 13 and you have to be my younger sister?" Elias asked.
"Okay, then say how is that possible that we are here, hm?"
"Fine you gave a good reason but why is you hair color red, did you try to copy our mother."
"No. For some reason when I got here I got this color of the hair and I kinda feal strange in side me, like some powers are in me."
"Great, lucky you, you have special powers while I only got this two weird strange bracelet." and Elias showed the strange two bracelet.
One color was pinkish and the other cyan. "Wow, I wish I had that and what dose it do?" Sophie asked.
"I have no clue it looks like one of those bracelets that glow in the dark, but this one glows every single second and I feal a strange connection with it, like it's a part of me." Elias replied. "Well, what do you what to do then?" Sophie said.
"Well, we can join an army that's fighting the greatest evil in this land."
"Hm, okay. Anything is fitting me." Then we started walking towards the front gate.

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As I was walking with Sophie towards east I started to talk.
"Hey, Sophie." I said. "Yeah." she replied. "Can you tell me something that will happen in the futer that has to do with me?"
"Sorry, can't, it might change the whole you."
'Fine." I said in a sad voice. We have walked at least an hour in the forest before we saw a smoke in the air. Then we started running towards it and I said, "Hey do yu-" before I could finish what I was saying Sophie put her hand on my mouth so I want talk and made a sign that meant 'look there.'
When I looked there where demons, at least 4. "What should we do." I whispered. "No clue but it's the best if we cross around so they won't see us." Then I looked into the right of me while Sophie was watching the demons and I saw a demon right in front of me. This demon had a bull had, but it was all red fur, red human body and red fur legs like the bull, well technically you can say a red minator. I yelled and punched him in the face with all my strength and I yelled "WE BETTER GET OUT OF HERE!" So we ran and the other demons heard us and started chasing us. One of the demons had large horns but he wasn't all red he was all dark purple. Another demon with smaller horn and blueish had a giant mace that he could barely hold, the third one had a giant sword and looked more like an orc, finally the third one looked like a leader in here because had a funny looking hat and looked like demon mixed with orc, and human. "We can't run away from them for a long time." I said it to Sophie. She stopped and said, "well what do you want us to do then." I looked at the demons and the back toy Sophie. "Fight of course." Then we both looked at the demons. "You know you fight better than me." Sophie said. "No I don't, you took karate longer than me." I said. "Well still I don't fight as good as you." THe I looked at her and said, "D you have any better to do."
Then I made a pose, one leg was facing to the right and bended in a little angle, my whole body was facing the same expect my had, other leg was expended to the left side of the way my body faced and was still touching the ground, my right hand was bend in 90 degrees angel and touching my body and my other arm was expended and in 5 degrees angle and my palm was opened. Sophie was just standing so I stood up to then I saw that the person with the heavy mace was running towards me but there was a root and it there was high changes that he will trip over it. When he was near me by like a 3 feet, I just jumped to another side and he didn't realize it but he was trying to pull a root with his foot and he tripe, and the same thing happened to the sword demon while trying to attack Sophie. What kind of morons they are. Then I started to fight with they guy with a huge hat, while Sophie started to fight with another demon. He was trying to punch me but I dodged his every attack. Sophie already by that time knocked out his about and she swinged her arm while saying, "leave me brother alone." and after she did that a really bright arrow came out and hit the demon and send him flying five meters away."What was that." I said in extincting voice. "I have no clue." She answered. "Well whatever that was lets just take there water and food," Later on we took there food and water and went towards a dark thunder cloud that was on top of a castle.

Okay can some one please write how the main people find Sophie and Elias. Also Zab and Reaper nice job but there was mostly talking but still nice job.Also I need to get my imagination back (have no clue what to watch, please give what to watch.)
Please comment because in the futer I want to write a book.
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I wrote this on my mobile phone,(takes me an hours and was annoying too) and right now I am at Daymio and I will post this. I edited a little when I see a few changes, but nothing much... This chapter is more like a guide post which will remind you where you are and what is going on all around. I didn't wanted to go on with action for now... Later.

Rain wasn't falling for days in city Cikuro. All the dark clouds moved northeast, to land covered always with darkness and dust. Now only fog remain in west lands. Sun and the sky were covered by a lot of wired clouds. The graveyard was all in thick fog, that you could wedge into one grave with no problem. There was one man... standing and looking into one grave. Then other mean appeared and came to this one whom was standing quietly.
''We can't change the past right?'' Sharky said with sad voice.
''No... But we can change the future.'' Tiny answered seriously and cold on his question like he feel no pain for his brother.
''And how... How you're planing to change the future!? By sitting in this city and do nothing!!?'' Sharky screamed.
''We are here, because it was last Anubis's wish!!! To protect this city and Kira!! You think this is not hard for me!!?'' Tiny started to screaming on Sharky and then he suddenly get tired, so he sit on the wet ground.
Then there was a little pause, but Sharky sit near Tiny and started with talk again.
''Why Kira won't come here and pray for his husband?'' Sharky asked.
''It's to hard for her, to come here... She cannot accept the fact that Anubis is dead. That is just running away from sadly true.''
''Do you know where are all the heroes?'' Sharky asked again.
''I heard that Drahcir and Sonidow are taken as prisoners in Castle Firend by Julian. Cen, Philus and Mailliw has gone to help Drahcir and Sonidow without any army...''
''Very brave...'' Sharky interrupted Tiny, but Tiny continued.
''Long, Simoneon, Harold and Alec are in the east woods with small army from city Cikuro...''
''And prince Noir?'' Sharky become a little boring with questions and Tiny realized that.
''I don't know... I think that he gone with Cen, Philus and Mailliw too. Come on now brother, let's drink something.'' Tiny said.
Sharky already stand up and started to walk, but Tiny put one flower he was holding on Anubis grave and said:
''Live in peace my brother... I'm sure you're on better place now. I hope you will wait for us together with Mayon. I will meet you again brother... I will...''
''Hey Tiny! Are you coming!?'' Sharky screamed and broke his thoughts.
Tiny put his hand on Anubis's grave and then left the graveyard with Sharky. As them two were walking through the streets peoples were looking at them with sadness on their faces. Peoples know what they lost and how they feel. Soon Tiny and Sharky arrived at the square from where you could see one big tavern. There at square they saw two children, wearing strange clothes.
''Hey who are this kids, and what are that funny clothes on them?'' Sharky asked again.
''You think that I know? Actually I don't care. Let's go and drink something.'' Tiny said and so they left them and gone to drink something.
Soon the night come and another day passed. Tiny and Sharky gone to palace in their rooms to be with their two wifes. But Kira... Kira was on her bed in palace. She was still crying... And she did not dare to take a look on graveyard. On graveyard where lied the body of person she like the most. Anubis's body who was resting in cold and peace...
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No one wrote in here for a centuries so it's time to get it back.
@Anubis: You might check it on computer when you have time because you have lots of mistakes.
P.S. I get lots of time bored writing after every one, please somebody write in the forum novel or it might be never finished.

Man those demons where weird and scary, or is it just me that every thing is weird for me. Well I hope we find that army that tries to fight Julian and will lose without my help, because I'm a strategy master and they probably have a weak army, but how can I help them and why me and Sophie are here? Ah, why do I have so many questions in my head every time I think of random stuff, well it's good then not have questions in you head. It's almost night and we still can't find any human or the army. Those where my thoughts while I was walking and looking at the ground. "Look there," Sophie pointed said in exiting voice. When I looked where she pointed there was smoke and light which means a campfire. We started to run towards it. There where two man siting both had sword near there hands, probably if a demon come to attack them they are prepared for defending. " Hello."
The two man grabbed there swords and held the end of it near my neck and I could even swallow not to get a cut. "Sorry we thought you where some robbers or demons but I guess you are just kids," one the man said. He looked like mid 40 and had a scar near his mouth and he had a beard but looked as was shawed last night, he had brown eyes also he had white hair in a messy style which looked weird on him, the other man looked much younger and he had cyan eyes and black neat hair. There cloths where all leather and had a cape and gloves. After I studied the two man the put there swords down. "Why are you looking at me funny," the oldest man asked. "It's nothing," I replied and nervous voice. "Are you two brother and sisster, because your faces look weary similar, but your hair and eye's color don't match," the oldest asked once more. "Yes I'm his younger sister," Sophie said and the two man laughed. "Young lad is it true or your sister is crazy?" "No, it's just we are from another world and she came from futer of my time but for her I cam from the past in her time and my eyes are green because of my parents but her hair changed when she came here," I said really quickly. "Well I can see that you are from another world from your cloths and the things on you hands, you have some magic glowing rings while she has some thing with numbers," he said. "Well what I have is a watch which shows time, and what my brother has is an item he got when he came here." "Now can I ask you a question," I said. "Fine," the younger one said. "Where are you going and why," Sophie asked. "Well, I had an mission to get a large and a good map around this world not just where Juliann's castle is but even more, everything around, so I got my self a pretty good map even more then we needed but it did cost me a fortune, and he came with me because he wanted to help the army also sorry for being so rude and not introducing my self, my name is Egil and his is Urbahn." "My name is Elias and my sister is Sophie," I said. "Hm, your sister lad name means wisdom and yours.. sorry me lad, forgotten it but remembered it reading in a book." ' The Lord Is My God' or 'Gate To Heaven,' I replied quickly. "Sir can you kindly show us the map." He looked puzzled at me then reached at one of the bags and there and he got a scrolled map and then started to unroll it and faced it up to us. It was big and it had so many details also so many cities showed there, but then the ink on paper started to vanish. Slowly the map vanished into a small area. "What how can this be!?" Egil screamed at then he started to hold his head as it was hurting, and then Ubrahn started to hold him. " I can't remember the map at all just a small part," the man said then I picked up the map and made 10 holes in it. "At least I remembered some places," and then Sophie made 3 more holes. "Well I remembered 13 cities."

Well that's it and it's big and boring.
Somebody please write.
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''This world... is a big maze... of sadness and darkness. Why this is happening to us? All of those darkness, sorrow, demons, evil lords and after all of this, the greatest evil of all... Julian. We fought so many times, and for what? To save the peoples, to save good creatures, to save our world... that we once new. When you're saving so many things and going through all that darkness, you start to think that you're some kind of a hero. But I must agree... the way of heroes is hard. There is no escaping from fact that our old world is slowly going down. This fogs, rains and black sky is choking me... they are rising above everything good I can protect, I must protect. I can hear dark whispers in my head... or... maybe I can't hear anything else. I miss my friends... Anubis, Drahcir, Sonidow, Tiny, Sharky, Kira, Alec, Harold, Long, Simoneon. Where are all of them? I can still hear Anubis's death scream. His death still lights in my eyes, and disappearance of Drahcir and Sonidow. What am I doing here? How can I stop such a great evil? What if more of my friends gone like Anubis, Drahcir, Sonidow and Noir? What will be with our light world and all creatures in him? Is there any real hope for us? All of those dark questions and voices are obsessing me... Trying to take my reason from me. I miss my old friends so much... I miss everything that is good beyond this new dark world. I don't know what will be in the future, but I know that there are friends with me still: Philus, Mailliw, Daymio. I don't know where Manji is, maybe he gone to his old strange world. And here we are... in the middle of darkness, near that castle Firend. The Julian together with demons and evil lords will be ready for great invasion. I will do everything to stop them, I will do everything to protect my friends and creatures from my world.'' Cen was talking to himself in his minds while Philus, Mailliw and Daymio were sleeping. Suddenly Philus woke up and came near Cen who were siting in front of the big fire.
''You're awake? You look like zombie.'' Philus said and sit near Cen.
''I was thinking...'' Cen said.
''I see. So, you're going to spend all night here? Sitting in front of fire and thinking about horrible future?'' Philus asked, but Cen didn't responded.
''Huuh... I'm sorry because of our friends. I'm sorry because of you. You shouldn't think that much about darkness. Or if you really wanna think about it my friend, you must be careful. It can obsess you.''
''I'm fine Philus.''
''No! You're not! You just think you are!'' Phil started to scream.
''That's how Anubis's always though! He always thought about problems, even on small ones! And he never get tired of thinking about darkness! That's why he died! He died because he didn't fear the death!'' Cen was screaming.
Then there was a long pause and you could hear only the fire and easy wind.
''I'm sorry because Anubis too. He wasn't... He wasn't bad after all.'' Philus said sadly.
''It's ok Philus. I will go to sleep now. Did everyone agreed that we must go back in the woods to small army?''
''Yes, everyone agreed. Now go and get some sleep Cen, you will need it.'' Philus said and Cen gone to sleep.
Philus was looking into the fire. Then he looked at the black sky full of thunders.
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OOC: Thanks Anubis. Hadn't got any inspiration for writing before. It wasn't what I wanted for Cen, but thinking about it, it enables many new possibilities...

Even the darkest night has an end. And each one is followed by a new day.
Phil was the first one who had been woken up by the first sunbeams, finding himself still sitting in front of the fire which had already burned down. On his right he noticed Cen waking up too.
“Good morning. Are you fine again?”
Cen was yawning.
“Yes, sure.”
Phil was looking at him suspiciously. Replying his view, Cen suddenly began to laugh.
“Now you are the one worrying too much. I'm fine, really. As long as I can fight against the evil, thinking about the horrible future is pointless.”
Finally Philus started smiling, too. Nevertheless there was still some kind of anxiety in his eyes. But he chased it away. Cen had withstood the sorrow he had felt such often many times. Maybe he was worrying too much.

Soon Mailliw and Daymio woke up, too. When the sun detached from the horizon, everyone was ready. Philus and Daymio weren't feeling good with the sun above them, but they had reached the decision that it was saver to wander at daytime.
It became a quiet walk as everyone was lost in his own thoughts. Mailliw was looking back every few minutes. It was hard to accept for him that they had to leave Drahcir and Sonidow alone in that castle.
Philus had soon fallen behind. Now he was watching both Cen and Daymio. They were so similar, with their experiences and their sorrows. And yet the past had made two completely different men out of them. Now Philus feared that both of them would loose their fight against the demons of resignation.
He caught up with Daymio.
“Everything OK with you?”
Daymio just nodded.
For a short period of time both were silently walking next to each other. Then Philus began to speak again.
“See... I can understand your hate against the humans, but can you live with an attitude like that? I mean, after all you are a vampire. Running away from that fact won't help you. What's if you won't be able to turn into a human again?”
“I have to.”
“But if you can't, you must live with it. The humans have threatened you unjustly, but not every human is like that.”
“One human with enough hate to kill me is already enough.”
“So is a life like you have it now what you want? With a fence made out of solitude and hate to keep the rest of the world away?” Philus' voice nearly turned into a scream. Then he suddenly stopped.
“Sorry. But I fear that you maybe never will live a real life if you go on like that. What is saving your life worth then? Think about it, OK?”
With these words Philus fell back a few meters again, leaving Daymio alone with his thoughts.

Mailliw and Cen were walking close to each other, not saying a word. Once again Mailliw looked back to the dark walls of the castle firend slowly merging with the sky.
“I wonder whether we will see Drahcir and Sonidow again. What might happen to them?”
Cen turned to Maillliw.
“Hey, don't worry about that. We will rescue them if they won't be able to do it on their own.”
“And what if not? By now Julian must have arrived at his castle again. Will he find them? Will he kill them? Or are they already dead?”
Cen looked at him with an insightful view.
“You are worrying too much about things you can't change. You don't help them through acting like that. What does it change? Try concentrating on the things that are possible to achieve something.”
Mailliw nodded but still didn't seem totally convinced.
“Think about what Drahcir would do.”
Now Mailliw smiled.
“Thanks.”

“What is saving your life worth then?” The sentence remained in Daymio's mind, like a sign burnt in he could see it when he closed his eyes. Suddenly a picture he hadn't seen for ages came up in his mind. The picture of his mother, smiling at him. Then dark mist began to veil it.
What is it worth then?
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Yeah, people are writing, but where is the army near the city Quartz.

Manji was walking in mid air as it was land and he was looking beneath every thing that happened. There where so many tings and he could see every detail's as he was in front of the object. Then he looked where was the other buildings and he could see anything as his was blind. "What, why can't you see," asked Manji. "Because Julian has more power then ever and it looks for nobody go out the borders ," said new Manji. "Well what can we do," asked Manji. "We can do nothing but those two kids can do what we can't do," new Manji replied. "What are you talking about, those are just kids, they are weaker than you much weaker," Manji was screaming at new Manji. "If I could read there minds by there shadows I would, but I can't read there shadows or know about them, even where are they from," New Manji replied and took off towards Z.

Just a short chapter about Manji.

Edit: I'm not sure how to call new Manji and if you have an idea just PM.
@Bellow: Zab you messed up, Drachi and Sonidow don't know who is Manji because they where taken to Firend before they knew who is Manji.
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Drahcir and Sonidow had regrouped and were starting to lose hope. They could not make heads or tails of the castle and each way they went looked the same as the last way. Sonidow heard a noise behind him and saw Drahcir collapse in exhaustion.
“Get up!” Sonidow yelled. “We don’t have time to sit around.”
Drahcir raised his head and looked at Sonidow, “But don’t you see, there’s no way out of here!”
Sonidow grabbed him by his collar, “That sort of thinking is the reason we are still in here in the first place! Stop acting so hopeless and get a grip!”
Then all of a sudden the space in front of them began warping. Both of them were locked in position and didn’t move. Sonidow was still gripping Drahcir’s collar as both of them looked at the distorted area in front of them. It began twisting counterclockwise and another area could be seen through it.
“Is this Manji’s doing?” Sonidow asked.
“Who knows?” Drahcir said looking closely at the area. “Where is that?”
Sonidow loosed his grip on Drahcir’s collar and slowly walked towards it. “It looks like a forest.”
He peered closer and suddenly got that burning sensation. It was so strong this time that he took a knee holding his chest. Drahcir quickly rushed to his aid.
“Are you alright, Sonidow?” Drahcir asked attempting to touch his shoulders.
“Stay back!” Sonidow swiped him out of the way.
Drahcir moved away from him. He quickly noticed that Sonidow’s eyes were losing their color and his facial expression had changed completely. Sonidow rose on both of his feet and drew one of his swords.
“S-Sonidow?” Drahcir barely managed to utter his name; he was so frightened by this sudden change in his partner.
Sonidow looked back at him and the look he gave to Drahcir made him fall to his knees in trepidation. Sonidow turned his head back to the distorted area in front of him and, without warning, lunged straight through it. Drahcir did not dare pursue him. He thought to himself.
“Was that really Sonidow? I’ve never seen such an intense feeling of hatred before.”
The portal had closed completely and Drahcir was lost in thought still trapped inside the castle.
Escape is a two-syllable word that grants temporary peace in the present to a future victim.
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@Hacker: Now you're with army... and you better start to write serious chapters.
@no one, chase, Simoneon: You guys too, better start to write…
@Reaper: Sorry, I didn't know that Cen is such a positive person. He is something like Sharky, but much more serious. Ok, good to know...:D
@Topic: Here it is... finally a new serious chapter. Hope you will like it.

It was still the morning in the west woods near city Quarzt. A lot of workers from city Cikuro came to Quarzt to repair him. The army from city Cikuro was in the woods, near Quarzt. Some soldiers woke up and made fire. They were preparing breakfast for them and other soldiers. Long woke up early, together with soldiers. He was walking through their camp looking at all those soldiers. They seemed to be… happy. They were joking and laughing with each other, but quietly. Suddenly Long saw Simoneon, sitting near one fire. He looked so peaceful, with closed eyes and serious face. Long didn’t wanted to disturb him so he just passed by and gone to the end of the forest. He stood near one tree and looked on city Quartz in a distance.
’’Gosh, they are working so hard… Trying to repair the city like it will hold the hordes of evil.’’ Long said loud.
’’Why do you think it this city won’t stop the evil lad?’’ Simoneon’s voice appeared near Long.
Long turned quickly like he scared and answered.
’’Huuh… Julian has so much power right now, together with demons and evil lords. What we can possibly do?’’
’’We can have a hope.’’
’’What differences hope does make anyway? We are dying in battle, no matter do we had a hope or not…’’ Long said.
’’Hope can help us to defeat our fear and doubt. When you cross over your fears and doubts you can do… everything.’’ Simoneon said and so them two were talking in quiet morning.
Soon most of soldiers woke up and started to eat or having fun. Alec was still sleeping, but then Harold came in his tent.
’’Hey Alec! Come on! Wake up! It’s morning.’’ Harold said
’’Damn it! It’s still not noon. Wake me up when lunch will be finished.’’ Alec answered and covered with pillow his head.
’’You stupid… we won’t have for lunch! At noon we must continue to the city Quartz and give the protection to workers for some time!’’ Harold screamed, but Alec didn’t responded.
Very soon Harold got out of Alec’s tent. He was passing near some soldiers while they were laughing.
’’Hey Sir Harold! Would you like to try this meat! Come, sit with us and eat.’’ One soldier yelled.
’’Thanks guys, but I’m not hungry. Maybe later.’’ Harold said and started to move deeper on the north side of the forest.
’’Aww come on! Ok, you just return quickly because we are moving to city Quartz for 2 hours!’’ Soldier screamed after Harold and left him alone.
Harold was going deeper and deeper in the forest. He was looking for a water because he was so thirsty and his bottle was empty. Finally he found a big plash of clear water. He scored his head into the plash to drink a water. When he pulled out his head pleased that he found the water, the water was still rough. But when water calmed Harold saw the reflection that showed the head of lion in the water. He scared and pulled out quickly his sword, but then he feel terribly weakly. Suddenly Harold fell down back in the plash and the women with the mask of the lion pulled him out. Harold coughed and spat the water.
’’Who… *chough!* Who are you?’’ Harold asked with weak voice.
’’I am Arbina, forest guardian! I am protecting this forest from chaos and intruders, like you!’’ Arbina said.
’’Wait. I’m Harold, and I didn’t do nothing wrong.’’ Harold tried to explain, but he failed.
’’And your men!? They are going all through this forest, from Cikuro to Quartz and they are killing every animal on their path!’’ Arbina screamed.
’’Well, I wasn’t eating those meat and my soldiers need strength to protect this forest.’’ Harold said with quiet voice moved from Arbina to sit near her.
’’How you’re going to protect it!? I heard that mighty Julian already beat you, other heroes and your army near Ancient Lake!’’ Arbina said.
’’There is always a hope. The city Quarzt is going to be repaired soon and our greatest keep will be ready for a great battle against Julian. We just need to protect the workers from demons.’’ Harold said and smiled.
Now and Arbina changed her loud voice and take off her mask.
’’So, you’re the one who have great hope? I wish I could be more like you.’’ Arbina said with sad voice.
’’That’s why friends exist. To give you hope.’’ Harold said and smiled.
’’Now I must go. I’m pretty far from my camp. And I must go with my army to give the protection to workers at Quarzt. You better stay in a forest. Will I see you tomorrow in forest?’’ Harold said with happy voice and stood up.
’’I got some work to do. Demons spies are hiding even here, in west woods. So I must act quickly. I think I will be able to see you tomorrow. Take care of yourself Harold, you’re a good man.’’
’’Thanks, you too. Well, see you tomorrow then!’’ Harold yelled and run into a deepness of forest.
’’I hope so…’’ Arbina whispered and walked away. Harold was running all the way from place where he drunk water to the army’s camp. When he came to camp he saw that there were no tents and fires were extinguished. So Harold continued with running and when he get out from the woods on open field he saw an army, moving to city Quarzt. After some time Harold reached Simoneon, Long and Alec at the end of the column.
’’Where did you been!? We were looking for you everywhere!’’ Alec asked.
’’I… I was… huh, I was searching for this potion. Looks like usual water but when you touch that liquid with any part of your body, it will make you terribly weak. Here you go Simoneon.’’ Harold was trying to explain with exhausted voice and he hand over the bottle of strange potion to Simoneon, because Simoneon asked him to hand over the bottle.
’’You was searching for so long? I see you’re very exhausted.’’ Long asked Harold.
’’Yes, I gone far away. It can be useful in battle.’’ Harold answered.
And soon, they all arrived at Quartz. The walls around city was already big and white, but not finished, all houses and taverns had white-yellow color and were almost done, but the castle at the end of the city was still at the beginning.
’’Wow. They are doing good and fast…’’ Alec started to talk, but Long interrupted him.
’’Of course they are fast. A lot of workers came from Cikuro to help repair the city Quarzt.’’ Long said and so Alec, Long and Harold were admired to city.
Simoneon was talking with some main workers, but then the grey, thick clouds started to turning into a black, dark and one guard screamed in horn from the wall.
’’The great army of demons is in the distance, but there is no Julian!! They are coming from east!! Prepare for battle!!’’ Guard’s voice was loud and it was spreading through all the city. Simoneon, Alec, Harold and Long met in front of the gate of city Quarzt.
’’So…’’ Harold started and Simoneon continued.
’’Shall we boys?’’ Simoneon said and gone to the wall together with Alec.
Harold just looked confused at Long. Long rolled with his eyes, pulled Harold to follow him out of the city and said:
’’Here we go again…’’
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@Anubis: Your my hero in writing.
@All people on Anubis list: Yeah all you people better write a good reason why you aren't writing or write if you have no reason why you aren't writing.
@Topic: Okay this chapter might be long because Elias will go into most dangerous trap in the whole universe and they will soon see the army and every one else.

"AWWW," was what I said when I woke up. "He sleepy princess wake up," said Sophie in my tent. "Hey, that's not a proper way to say to your older brother," I said in an angry voice.
"Well sorry, come on we have to leave after 10 minuets, and you have only 5 minuets left."
"Okay,okay, I was already waking up, so you didn't had to disturb me."
"Just get packed up, okay, that's what I'm asking you," and then she leaved my tent.
At night Sophie and me had a small talk about this world and I had no idea why do I feal like part of me is still there, like right now I go to school and in the same time I'm here in the middle of no where. I always have questions and in here I have so many more questions then ever, 'why are we here' that was my biggest questions of all. "Your ready lad," said Egil. "Yeah, yeah just need to put my water," and then I did and went near them. "It's too bad that we don't know any cities, just there location, and that's not enough," said Urbahn and unrolled the map. This time the map did a different thing then yesterday, it restored its ink. "It's amazing its coming back, the ink is going back to the map," I screamed in happiness. "What are you talking about lad, the map is the same as it was last night," Egri said, but I still could see the map normal even when I rubbed my eyes, and so did Sophie. "I think that the spell who ever did that didn't work on us for a long time unlike you," I said. "Lad, how can it be when you are younger than me and have less knowledge about magic and have no effect by the spell."
"Well maybe because I come from a different world and that my other part of me is effected by it right now but there is no land like this in my world, and I have some knowledge about magic from my world you know." After that we started walking towards our destination. After a while of walking some thing strange had happen, I walked through a portal.
It was all bright and white around me like a room where there is nothing but you and its completely white. I could still see my body, and after I looked around the room started to fall apart like in a virtual room. After everything fall under me I happened to fall. I could see the skies and sand around me while falling, so at least its going to be a soft landing. After I hit the ground I started to spit the sand from my mouth and started to jump to get all the sand out of me. I looked around and could only see sand and when I looked up where I fell I couldn't see any clouds anymore. This is freaky, could I be on the hell planet Arrakis, but what can prof it. Then I giant thing was moving in the sands and that could only mean one thing on this planet. "SAND WORM!" I started to run towards the nearest rock but that was a bad I idea because now the sand worm was following me instead going where it was going. It was so hard to run towards a rock because of all the sand around me and that it was super hot in hear. When I reached the rock I happened to fell again but this time I was in Hitlers HQ. All of the people looked at me where I was and that was near Hitler. Hitler started to scream and we then I grabbed the gun in his belt, grabbed him by the neck. "Do you have that speaks Russian in here," I screamed in Russian. But before any one could react I fell again. This time it was much harder because I was in some room with lots of obstacles for LeParkour and there where hounds behind me and running after me. I started to run towards the flag and the first thing was wall running and under neath me where spikes, fire, and lots of those stuff. When I was near the wall I jumped, started to run on the wall and got to the other side and my heart was beating thousands of hit per second. Yet again I fell and this time it was much much worse. I was standing on the Empire State Building, with hounds near me. There is only one option Elias, and that is to jump, and that was my only option because I didn't want to be tern apart by dogs. So I jumped from Empire State Building towards New York streets, but when I was almost to the ground about hundred of meters away my bracelet started to glow and I was back with my sister, Egri, and Ubrahn. "Elias, your okay," I asked Sophie."Yeah, now...I'm...safe," I said while catching some breath. After we started to walk again we heard some horn blow, "It must mean something but is going to happen," said Ubrahn. We started to run towards the sound as fast as we could and after a while we reached the city of Quartz and where near some people, about 50 meters away.

Yeah, a long long story.

Okay I planning to write after some one writes, but oh well I'm going to write also this chapter will be about Manji killing.

Manji landed on a small field and everywhere where demons. Manji just stood and looked around the field into the red demons eyes around him and took his sword out. "Uh, I wished not to get my sword bloody today, but oh well, it looks like all of you will be dead," the other Manji spoke in a quite but deadly tone. All of the demons just stare at him and there was about a half a legion of demons in here which was about 1k.
Okay now for the action
Manji put a smile on his face looked around and found about a 50 of archers in here behind trees. One of them got ready to fire a arrow towards Manji but he just quickly turned around and threw something at that demon archer and the demon fell. Then every demon started to charge at him but Manji stood at one place. When one of the demons got close to him Manji just slashed him in half.
More and more demons came at him but he just kept slashing them in different ways. After Manjio killed about 50 of them they started not to charge at him but then Manji started to attack charge at them and attack from behind. Then couple of archers started to fire at him but he blocked every attack and started to throw shurikens at them from his sleeves. Then Manji started to throw shurikens and attack with his sword at the demons. One of the demons that attacked at Manji from behind got stabbed about five steps away from him and that demon saw that Manji started to dissolve and that the real one was behind him and he threw him at the enemies. Manji started to walk and slash at the same time and one made a scratch at him so far. More and more demons started to attack him but all of the failed and died. After 10 minuets 436 died. Manji jumped in the air about 10 meters and threw about a hundred shurikens at the demons and three of them tried to escape. More and more demons attacked gim but all fail. When a pack of ten attacked him three of them died from a shuriken, five from teleportaion to back in time, one from head explosion and one Manji started to stabbed throw his arms and legs in the air and then he threw him much higher, jumped towards him, stabbed in his chest and threw down at the ground. After that all around Manji was blood and dead bodies
I am back, not really.
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