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#81
Doesn't really look like the char..

Some points:
- His hair on the forehead (sorry don't know how to say on english), it's kind weird
- His ears are to high
- Eyes are in a different angle from the head. (If you keep looking to the eyes, fixing it, the face would be strange)

Well these are just little details.

7.5/10

You've good drawing technics, by the way.
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Didn't get the thing about the angle of the eyes... Tried to fix the other issues.

Guigs Wrote:You've good drawing technics, by the way.

Thanx

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#83
his left eye looks kinda strange... like if it was rotated a little. Also, the pupil in this eye should be move a little to the right side, it looks a bit like he is cross-eyed :P
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(10-15-2008, 06:45 PM)Blue-Phoenix Wrote:  his left eye looks kinda strange...

Left for us or for him?

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#85
from our perspective it is the right one. but from our poor guy's perspective, we're talking about his left eye :P
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Better now? :D

EDIT: Please be picky!

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#87
Seems better, and about that hair on the forehead, put it again, but a little bit smooth, before it was a little bit strange, and there's a hair under the ear, that i think you should toke off..

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Note that the quality is poor.
I'm using the webcam, unfortunaly.
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#88
I made an update...

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And thx for face, but I will stick to my own :D

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#89
Looks quite better.
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What can be improved? Or is it the absolute ultimate LF2 face that can possible be obtain? (I doubt that...)

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