my first sprite

[joncisLT]

i try more

[betitngoan]

uhm , good eye !!
see some sprite of Apoc , Seig to learn how to shape the pant

[joncisLT]

here is another sprite

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hair i think not good

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this day i done the last sprite and the best

[Bamboori]

i notice that you use "pillow shading", that means you shade from outside (dark) to inside (bright). that doesn't look good. try >this< tutorial to try a "normal shading", meaning you have a imaginary source of light.

[joncisLT]

i try bamboori to this tutorial and this is my resultant

[Lauli]

Hey, a lot better!

Another thing you might want to consider is using not such vivid colours.
Here, the shirt is very saturated, same with pants and shoes. It's not something you would wear.
Try to use grey, or grey-ish colours too.

Also, make "bigger" hair. If you compare this sprite to LF2 chars, then you'll probably notice, that your sprite doesn't have any "back" hair.

Keep the spriting going, you're pretty good already! ;)

[Marshall]

The improvement that you've made within today is absolutely shocking and I salute to you on that.

[joncisLT]

i done one more and happy helloween

[betitngoan]

i think you shuz brush with small size

[joncisLT]

ok i try later