[CHAR] HYDRO (first project mine)

[Ak.]

he means you drew it too small :P
compared with other lf2 chars he pretty small.

assuming that you dont want to make him a dwarf, i suggest scaling it to the right size and redrawing it.

pff :c
okaay im gona try to redraww it but theres no program to resize and dont make it pixelate?

[Bamboori]

use any program besides paint :P
eg gimp, photofilter, paint.net etc

edit: @below: ofc, i just dont know how ask blue phoenix for that or search a tutorial

[Ak.]

use any program besides paint :P
eg gimp, photofilter, paint.net etc

i have photoshop it works with this program?

[LutiChris]

if u like the smaller version just scale it so u can easily draw from a size you can work with
and draw right over it onto a seperate layer...
this tutorial that Trickty made is pretty damn awesome...
http://www.lf-empire.de/forum/showthread.php?tid=5924

[Ak.]

well i finishee the sprite i make it bigger and redraw it and here it is:

Marshall edited this post 01-15-2011 11:53 PM because:

fantastic rate of improvement. well done!

[chase123]

Wow!looks really nice!
Good job dude.
The armor on the left needs some work though,looks like a smiley face.

[hell fightter]

contrast and details are to small i think.... when you resize it into smaller it all will fuse into one big blot

basides this i love the idea, just put some contrast and ill be great also congrats ! your first project and its a tottaly new character! and you keep lf2 style! even guy as arrogant as me did chis first project basic on cut and paste keep it up and good luck on project!


also i am amazed! so many potential good spriters apears there lately! gah i wish i could find more time to come around :/ or work on my projects... and when i just come around its just WOW! i think that age of additional characters for lf2 is just begining! lets begin the war of creativity! and good luck to all of new spriters!

[Ak.]

contrast and details are to small i think.... when you resize it into smaller it all will fuse into one big blot

basides this i love the idea, just put some contrast and ill be great also congrats ! your first project and its a tottaly new character! and you keep lf2 style! even guy as arrogant as me did chis first project basic on cut and paste keep it up and good luck on project!


also i am amazed! so many potential good spriters apears there lately! gah i wish i could find more time to come around :/ or work on my projects... and when i just come around its just WOW! i think that age of additional characters for lf2 is just begining! lets begin the war of creativity! and good luck to all of new spriters!

so much thankss man really want to finish this project at 100%

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Wow!looks really nice!
Good job dude.
The armor on the left needs some work though,looks like a smiley face.

okk man give an idea like what i have to do in the armor?
somee things that i can do or put to it

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i have make the face pic plz i want criticsm its my first face pic u can rate it and give opinions

[chase123]

Face picture needs some improvements,The head is small and there has to be a bit of skin underneath his scarf.
Good for your first attempt though!
Really waiting for this character,looks really promising.

[Taniaetc]

* The hair shading is somehow weird. Try looking at Davis', Woody's and Bat's hair shading
* You didn't shade the shoulder-pad thing. Every detail counts ;)
* Too low contrast on shading (like hell_fighter said)
* Body muscles look kinda weird also O.o Look at Mark's and Julian's if you want any examples

Otherwise that's a GREAT improvement there! Good luck with the char ;p

* A tip, try choosing an existing char's facepic (pick Davis if you want it easy) and draw over it
* His head is too small compared to other existing facepics
* Missing a black outline D:
* The hair needs to be bigger and a darker shading
* You didn't shade the scarf-thing, and probably there's too much folds there (?)