Ariel's finished art works

[prince_freeza]

crap, i just made a long c&c post and deleted it
any way i totaly love that vegeta drawing i cant believe i didnt se it. Best one is the middle one with colors only.
For the drawing: only one thing bothers me, the eyes idk whats wrong waybe its just me. Every thing else looks nice and well drawn.

For the colors: i reckon u got a nice coloring there. Armor nees so bright shading though. Also since u made another one with the glow colors should be changed a bit for ex (no aura= pale yelow hair and light skin shading)
(aura= golden yelow hair and some nice contrasted skin shadin)

sory if that was to much c&c but its only how much i love ur drawing, am totaly big on vegeta :-)

[Ariel]

thanks
i wait for your comment
ill try to fix what you tell me


by the way
i done the cowgirl:
http://arieltw1.deviantart.com/#/d3ca8so

[prince_freeza]

the f***? U made that?! Man nice skin shading,proportions,design,sexy look.

Need i to say more? Oh yea how did u do it? Am curius.

[Ariel]

The real body of Pain from Naruto Shippuden but with the akutski coat
like in DA:
http://arieltw1.deviantart.com/#/d3f6lt0




i think its my best work ever XD

[LutiChris]

Wow you did really nice strokes for each receding hairline...very nice
kinda reminds me of a 3d game design...shading is outstanding
u might want to fix proportions like the eye and nose....maybe it's just angle or somethin but they seem too big for his face..

[Alectric]

Thats awesome!
Now, this is just my opinion, because i dont know what the original character is supposed to look like, but i think you should brighten it up a bit!
make the eye stand out! or the shine in the hair!
Great drawing though!

[Sonic Boom]

Excellent Drawing!!
10/10
Remarks: I WANT THIS DRAWING HANGED IN MY BEDROOM!!!

[Monolith]

Yeah,yours Pain to dark.First i thought it's just screenshot from some Naruto game,but then i say to myself:this is art section its can not be screenshot,awesome drawing.

[Silverthorn]

Great job on the coloring of the hair; those purple strokes look great! If you have the chance to work some more on the piece, I'd recommend to (next to the brightening) add a few hair-strokes with a small (1-2px) brush to give it an extra-load of details

[Ariel]

the next naruto realife i made is Danzo the sixth Hokage
with the sharingan's hand

V1:
http://arieltw1.deviantart.com/art/Danzo-V1-207268657

V2:
http://arieltw1.deviantart.com/art/Danzo-V2-207268858


i want to know what everyone thing of it i worked on what you tolld me i didnt made it too much dark and also i did what people in DA told me
hope u guys like it!