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HAHA DUDE! u have IMPROVED A LOT WITH SHADING!! . The shading of HIS right arm is awesome as hell. The falme is also nice. Except for few flaws with perspective and some in hands, it is a good sprite... Show something more like this whaat.
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His Chest Looks like a square brick!
No offense !
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Marshall:
True.
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Boom:
That's becouse he is so musculary D: but yeah, maybe too square.
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You definetely need some contrast on his skin...he's just too pale for my linking
it's also rather small...though a lot of ur sprites are like it
i kinda played around with the bigger size for the dimensions and i think u could do alot using a 108x108 with the face alone
of coarse it'll need some adjustments here and there...but thats just my opinion
-so just edit the left side of his face +mouth/nose with a high contrast so we can see them better
-i can't say too much about his neck, but it definetely looks awkward
in that case i think u should have spaced out his back side to the right side so his body doesn't look too stiffly straight it also makes for a good pose
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06-12-2011, 01:53 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-24-2011, 09:18 AM by Whaat.)
Face pic i made for the sprite tournament:
![[Image: bg2facev2v3blu.png]](http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/Whaat-/bg2facev2v3blu.png)
<- i was happy that i had made facepic this good.
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Redesing for Davis using LF2 styled shading:
![[Image: dav.png]](http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/Whaat-/dav.png)
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![[Image: newdav.png]](http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/Whaat-/newdav.png)
Davis got little more musculary D:
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06-24-2011, 09:26 AM
(This post was last modified: 06-24-2011, 09:27 AM by Monolith.)
What i can see,its just baloon on his right arm
And you need to look at the human arm muscles proportions
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he looks druk, like hes gonna fall right now.. :/
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I like the new hair, but as monolith said, it just looks like the arms have been inflated like a balloon
http://i263.photobucket.com/albums/ii130/c_fire004/imi1.png
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06-24-2011, 10:09 AM
(This post was last modified: 06-24-2011, 10:09 AM by Whaat.)
Fix'd.
Before, after and even more after D:
![[Image: dav.png]](http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/Whaat-/dav.png)
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![[Image: newdav.png]](http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/Whaat-/newdav.png)
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![[Image: newdav2.png]](http://i764.photobucket.com/albums/xx286/Whaat-/newdav2.png)
Better, isn't it?
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