betitngoan's art

[Monolith]

Well i didn't understand why in picture 2 those 2 guys is so close to each other?

[betitngoan]

he's trying to catch the ball
and it's soooooo gay

[Hero destroyer]

wow! These are amazing. You sure are a good at art.

[betitngoan]

my comic
character
it's oneshot



WHAT"S " FAB " ????

Marshall edited this post 05-06-2011 10:54 AM because:

the colouring of the trousers and shirt is fab

[bashscrazy]

fab = fabulous~!

I like the hand on the girl with all ze fingers
the guys head with the full body looks weirdish - but looks really good in the 2nd one (without body - just head)

[betitngoan]

go hell
i away draw until 2 AM

[Bamboori]

when will your manga be published and how much will it cost?

seriously, with such skill it should be easy (assuming you have a good storyline and maybe someone helping you out with bgs, dont know how good you are at these) to publish your manga

gogogo betit!
also a small thing i noticed: most mangaka attracted to men draw better than those who arent

[klodasmone]

[Rant start]

First of all, wow. I really like the fact that you don't shrug away from drawing girls. How about creating an iconic trap character like Bridget from Guilty Gear? Think about it.

But I'm a critic here, not a driveller. You have a very distinct and unique coloring style. It's unprecedented at your young age. In fact, I don't see any room for improvement. You're that good. Right, not a driveller.

Your poses are fantastic from a mangasque (I just came up with this word) point of view. Very stylized anatomy combined with incredible painting technique make it stand out from a lot of styles I've seen back in the day. Right, right, not a driveller.

Here's my critics: I sense that you don't have a comic type plotline. You draw fine one pages, but that's all. This is not unbiased coming from me. Look at your own work - there are too many guys doing the "Come at me, bro" pose, i.e. spreading their hands like they don't know what the hell's going on amidst the chaos of smoke and debris. That, in my opinion, is the stage where your script is at. In smoke and debris.

But not to sound too discouraging here. I'll say that it's especially nice to see how you had progressed in the Art department through the years in this thread. My suggestion is as follows: team up with someone to come up with a story-line and enter a manga competition in your country (I would be surprised, if there isn't one). Test your luck there. Even if you won't get in the top three (which, too, I would be surprised), you'll come back with a hell of a lot of experience.

[/Rant end]

[betitngoan]

LMAO
i just draw , i don't think anything
and i don't understand what are you talking about ( sorry for my bad eng ...... and google's eng )

but my art still bad
wrong hand , wrong body ,... bla bla
but i will try the best
and i think i will bye bye this forum for the long time

[hell fightter]

hey betit one question.. i can see you inking there. can you tell me how to hold pen cause everytime im inking theres always some superfat one that makes CARNAGE out of pictue