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Jahvansi's sprites (Arcane)
#51
very goodish, some points to fix though:
- the difference between thigh and calf is too big in (our) left leg
- isn't the shirt overlapping a bit too much? it's looking like he has a big belly ^^
- this kind of hat normally has a notch (?) on the top. You already made an attempt with the line, so with a bit more shading in between the lines it would look more realistic.
- his left shoulder looks a bit weird. it's too round I guess. maybe that + the muchness of the overlapping shirt is making him look so crouched.
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should totally allow people to be all trolley on their birthday :D
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#52
(04-28-2011, 07:15 PM)Phil Wrote:  - the difference between thigh and calf is too big in (our) left leg

I think that's the design of the pants like bell bottom jeans ;)
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#53
^ still too big.. i didn't say to remove it... more to put one or one and a half more px lines to it.
or remove one pixel from the calf part
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#54
(04-28-2011, 07:15 PM)Phil Wrote:  - isn't the shirt overlapping a bit too much? it's looking like he has a big belly ^^
- his left shoulder looks a bit weird. it's too round I guess. maybe that + the muchness of the overlapping shirt is making him look so crouched.
Dude i also said these things and i am agreed with you.
pressed the agreed button!!

Alectric edited this post 04-29-2011 07:38 AM because:
If you're gonna press the 'agree button', just click the thank button and you dont have to post such short posts.
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#55
My entry of the sprite contrest:

Annie & Tibbers

[Image: annietibbers.png?t=1306250046]
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#56
i dont like the flame. it just doesnt fit.
otherwise i dig the design :D
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#57
PEDO B-... i mean "IT LOOKS SO AWESOMEEE!!!" but i have to agree with bamboori that flame doesnt fit that picture:/
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#58
Quote:PEDO B-... i mean "IT LOOKS SO AWESOMEEE!!!"
xDD really?
ye thought that 2 but this is Annie the Dark Child and she always got a flame in her hand so i had to give her one 2 :/

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#59
my entry for the "war":

[Image: warentry.png?t=1306514914]

got beting as my partner/enemy so im lost :D

@beting: pls dont take this seriously >_<
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#60
I am waiting for the skateboarder I requested!
And can you plz upload a video or make a tut on how you do shading cuz I like your style!
Edit: This is my 300th post on LFE!!!
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