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Little Fighter 2: Dawn of a New Era
#1
Hey everyone! This will probably be one the first full-on stories I've ever made, so I don't know how it'll turn out. I don't have very much of it writin' at all right now, but don't worry, I'll come up with it as I go. ;)

Edit: When they talk out loud, I'll do this:
Name: "Blablabla."

When they think to them-selves, I'll do this:
*Name*: "Blablabla."

Alright, I don't want to spoil too much, so I'll just tell you the main concept behind this story.

Little Fighter 2: Dawn of a New Era

Introduction:
This story has two MAIN main characters; Henry and Rudolf. The other main characters are the rest of the original LF2 fighters, Deep, John, Louis, Firen, Freeze, Dennis, Woody, Davis, Bandit, Hunter, Knight, Justin, Monk, Jan, Sorcerer, Bat, ??????, and ??????. Don't worry, if you haven't figured out who these two are, then you'll find out in the story at some point. There might also be a few sort-of-main characters through-out the story. One of them I know that'll be in the story for sure is Liso. This is a story about many nations being enemies and fighting for so many years, then, some very unsettling events start to take place all over the world. These events will stop some nations from waring so that they can work together to try and stop these evil events from continuing. Something sinister is going on and it'll be up to the Little Fighters to come together, find out what's going on and who's causing it, and to put an end to it. So, shall we begin with the story?

This will the the background-to-present part of Henry and Rudolf.
Chapter 1 (Click to View)
Luke means "Light of the Sacred Flame" in Ancient Ispanian.
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#2
Hmm.. looking forward to the prologue
since i couldnt think of a proper story involving a mainchar or two xD

offtopic: did i inspired u to write a story? xD if not then ._. damn my arrogance =p

E: another original lf2 fighter would be template =p
Say Anything - Alive with the glory of love

My first char: a rudolf mod <--- waiting for comments

LF story reasonable beginning <--clicky (Dont u dare not to leave a comment!)
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Fan of Jerry Hawks LF2 Fan movie, just epic animations~
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(07-16-2011, 04:31 AM)LSwarley Wrote:  Hmm.. looking forward to the prologue
since i couldnt think of a proper story involving a mainchar or two xD

offtopic: did i inspired u to write a story? xD if not then ._. damn my arrogance =p

E: another original lf2 fighter would be template =p

Thanks! :D

Off topic: Yes actually, you did lol! xD That's why, in that last post I put on your story thread, I mentioned Henry and Rudolf, then, I made my own story, making Henry and Rudolf the main characters, hehe. ;D So thank you!

Nah, I didn't want to use him in the story cause I don't like him very much, lol.

Edit: Btw, I just added a little taste of Chapter 1. :D
Luke means "Light of the Sacred Flame" in Ancient Ispanian.
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hmm.. its unclear why they are fighting =p but i think thats purpose? well makes it more interesting but annoying at the same time xD
at least list a prejudice or something u dont need to display the real reason but only an example ^^
and isnt that just the prologue?
Say Anything - Alive with the glory of love

My first char: a rudolf mod <--- waiting for comments

LF story reasonable beginning <--clicky (Dont u dare not to leave a comment!)
Story Progress (Click to View)

Fan of Jerry Hawks LF2 Fan movie, just epic animations~
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(07-16-2011, 05:00 AM)LSwarley Wrote:  hmm.. its unclear why they are fighting =p but i think thats purpose? well makes it more interesting but annoying at the same time xD
at least list a prejudice or something u dont need to display the real reason but only an example ^^
and isnt that just the prologue?

Yeah, it is. And you'll find out why they've been fighting real soon. In fact, it's really simple. You could probably guess it. xD
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well i just say what some one told me before too short! xD look at my louis past i added the detailed training part and the julian encounter though i thought it was enough xD when i read stories i enjoy the details but when i write them and im too lazy =p
we readers want details!~

E: offtopic: what do u think of my henry? xD rudolf will be coming later but i need some comments critism im sure i missed something as always =p
Say Anything - Alive with the glory of love

My first char: a rudolf mod <--- waiting for comments

LF story reasonable beginning <--clicky (Dont u dare not to leave a comment!)
Story Progress (Click to View)

Fan of Jerry Hawks LF2 Fan movie, just epic animations~
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Alright, I tied to add some more into the introduction, aka the prologue. I won't right off the bat tell you who the main villain(s) is/are, but you'll find out eventually.
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hmm.. could u seperate the texts u r adding? i mean now it isnt a problem but since u plan on completing this story it would be easier to read ^^

about the content: there is excitement missing =/ i mean before i read till the end i was able to say how it will be going on
Say Anything - Alive with the glory of love

My first char: a rudolf mod <--- waiting for comments

LF story reasonable beginning <--clicky (Dont u dare not to leave a comment!)
Story Progress (Click to View)

Fan of Jerry Hawks LF2 Fan movie, just epic animations~
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