[Char] Lori

[JustMe]

here is it, Lori - my 3rd project.

i would tell something about her, but she´s a char in progress for my manga. but i can tell she´s a samurai-girl with an energetic natur. i suppose she´ll be a closefighter with only swordattacks, i´m still idea gathering.


[spoilerrogress] face

breathing
walking
running
punch
super punch (base)
drinking[/spoiler]

[Monolanier]

When shes breathing and her shoulder goes down, arms and head should go one pixel down too.
Btw are you made it on 79x79.?

[JustMe]

somehow it doesnt fit her, so i didnt move her hands. and yeah, i did it on 79x79, without resizing and layers i can do it better.

[Shane]

This character looks great.

I wish you luck with this character.

[Bla bla bla 44]

Great that you started making her. I kinda agree wih EXG9 but it is almost not noticeable so no worries. And are you really making a manga?

[Gad]

Yes, as my love, sweet EXG9 said. He's right, as always. I love him so much for that. You should move head, when shoulders are moved. I bet EXG9 can easly show you exact way of her breathing. He's so nice member, he will probably be glad to help you. He's so cool and best spriter here. Just ask him to make this breathing for you, he's very good spriter and should do this immediately.

[Marko pro]

Yea exg9 said true like always.:P
I wish you good like!!...

off topic:
i know one more function of thank button.If somebody lough you then you should give him thanks.

[The Lost Global Mod]

somehow it doesnt fit her, so i didnt move her hands. and yeah, i did it on 79x79, without resizing and layers i can do it better.

well still, even though I kinda dislike arm movement too, your head for example moves too when you breath (we don't notice that too much, except while heavy breathing). So you should put a movement in there like half a pixel to a pixel.
Arms can stay static, that's totally up to personal taste.

Great that you started making her. I kinda agree wih EXG9 but it is almost not noticeable so no worries. And are you really making a manga?

Wouldn't you agree that the last bit is offtopic? You should send him a pm next time.

To the topic and especially to the facepic:
I don't know if you are going to go for a lf2-styled facepic, if you do make sure to use additional highlights in your next facepic. Especially in hair and skin.

Well if she is energetic, she should have alot of moves with much movement while doing so, and raw power in the attacks.
So at least a move where she hits many opponents, or one opponent many times. Or some shockwave move if you want to have something ranged.

[JustMe]

Great that you started making her. I kinda agree wih EXG9 but it is almost not noticeable so no worries. And are you really making a manga?

Wouldn't you agree that the last bit is offtopic? You should send him a pm next time.

i dont mind if you guys asking me here.
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not jet, for now its nothing more but my hobby to draw manga and a dream to become a great artist one day. i still need practice.

I don't know if you are going to go for a lf2-styled facepic, if you do make sure to use additional highlights in your next facepic. Especially in hair and skin.

i draw her in the week where i got my tablet, so it was like a exercise.

Just ask him to make this breathing for you, he's very good spriter and should do this immediately.

i know you was making fun of him, though it was a bad joke since i dont need help with animation


"fix" for standing.

i didnt want to make her head moving because her coolness looks like blew away.
walking



maybe i shall make a pet which´s always blowing at her to make her hair moving like this (joke)

edit:
any flaws?
edit2:
finished

[qwertz143]

yes, edit 2 is better
i prefered the armor though (from ur sketches thread) :P