Ariel's finished art works

[JustMe]

Almost awesome, but idk maybe arms should be ,how should i put it... Not fat but thick or something.
With cape on head she looks boyish, but i imagine her whitout cape and its realy good.

its because of her legs, its not in proportion with arms. upper body is from a small girl while legs are from a bodybuilder. make arms bigger and legs smaller.
she make a very sad face, not really the face of a fighter.

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[Ariel]

better? ^^ and i kinda like the face as it is fixed all other thigs u said

[Kashif]

her chest should be corrected one is smaller than the other

[Ariel]

her chest is actoualy correct
what makes u thing its not is that her armor looks to u wierd
but thats becouse its kinda coming out
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half way coloring done ^^
any c&c's?

[MnM]

Add backgrounds, and also please correct HER right arm. The elbow needs to be few cm up. And make her fist little bit bigger. Then i would love it more .

[Ariel]

and one more thing i forgot to post

[JustMe]

face: a.b.s.o.l.u.t.e. not feminin...
she has a damn serious sight, it could kill you in less then 5 sec. her bull nose...no, please keep it away.

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[Ariel]

lol but i want her to be like this she is not the kind of person who smile...
and anyway i dont want to make all my painting with same doll-face
so thanks but no thanks this time i disagree with u

[The Hari]

but she's not just person who doesn't like to smile. she is just awful, ofc i'm not talking about technical side, but about her as human. definitly no one would like to have she as girlfriend. she looks rather like ugly man in wig. neck is too fat and muscular, and this nose... there is just impossible to find girl with such a potato on face. as i said i like your drawing skills, but who needs drawings of ugly girls?

[Ariel]

lol...
u just see what u wrote? omg r u kiding me??
lolololol