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10-15-2008, 05:52 PM
(This post was last modified: 10-15-2008, 06:03 PM by Guigs.)
Doesn't really look like the char..
Some points:
- His hair on the forehead (sorry don't know how to say on english), it's kind weird
- His ears are to high
- Eyes are in a different angle from the head. (If you keep looking to the eyes, fixing it, the face would be strange)
Well these are just little details.
7.5/10
You've good drawing technics, by the way.
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his left eye looks kinda strange... like if it was rotated a little. Also, the pupil in this eye should be move a little to the right side, it looks a bit like he is cross-eyed :P
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from our perspective it is the right one. but from our poor guy's perspective, we're talking about his left eye :P
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