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The Secrets of the shadow Battles.
#11
hmm yeah thx ;) i'll change this
But i think everybody can imagine that they're watch out if people are comming or going
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#12
hmm
should i release chapter two?
or shouldnt i?

I'Ll give you some time to guess what will hapening
Guigs? dont say anything ;)
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#13
sure i won't say anything :D

but i'm also curious to know what's going to happen, please post chapter 2 :D
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#14
Quote:“You damnit bastards”

Freakin awesome XD :D

EDIT: another feckin awesome quote

Quote:Kenzo decided not to call him bastard cause he was really hungry.
Escape is a two-syllable word that grants temporary peace in the present to a future victim.
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#15
@zab
Thats my style :D



CHAPTER 2 – The King

They have finally arrived at the castle. Kenzo was glad cause he had dried mud all over his face, his clothes where full of scratches and only stripes. “It can’t come worse”, he thought. The soldiers were leading the way to the king.
They arrived at the great hall, where the king was.
The soldiers grabbed Kenzo and threw him on the floor.
“Ouch, you bastards,” Kenzo shouted,” That wasn’t quite nice”
“Shut up”, a man, who Kenzo identified as the king, said loudly.
“Why do you want to see me?” Kenzo asked.
“First I’ll tell you my name”, the men said “I’m King Razen”
“Uhm yeah “King” Razen”, Kenzo said.
“I want you too fight against the Dark Alliance”, Razen said.
“Why me? Why can’t you just go recruiting?”
“Cause you got some nice skills”, Razen explained.
“What do you mean?” Kenzo asked more confused.
“Your ability to create glass whenever you want”, razen said.
“Oh that… but why, why the hell are your soldiers treating me like an animal?” Kenzo said angrily.
“Because Guigs is their leutniant”
“And why does that have to do with my treatment”, Kenzo asked.
”You will get it, when you know him better” was the answer gave by Razen
Are you recruiting somebody else? I mean, does I’m the only one with this abilitys?”
“Hahahaha.” laughed the king “Not only you. There are some people who have this kind of abilities, let’s say 20% of all people.”
“Ah kay. Then first give me something to eat and I need sleep”
“Granted”
Then Kenzo was leaded to a simple room, with a bed.


Kenzo recovered himself really fast.
Somebody knocked on the door.
“Yeah?”
A man entered the room and introduced himself.
“My name is Ryuzoko, I’m the adviser of the king. And I’m here to help you a bit. Do you need something?”
“I don’t know if I need something, maybe a bit medicine for my wounds. And also give me some warm clothes, those are freaking cold.”
Ryuzoko wrote everything on a small paper.
“Okay, I’ll do it immediately.”
Ryuzoko leaved the room and kenzo was sitting on his bed.
Suddenly the door opened and Ryuzoko came in with warm clothes and medicine.
“How did you get it so damn fast?”
“It’s cause we need to be fast. Get dressed up with this and then follow me.”
Kenzo did what he said and followed him into the Great Hall.
“We need to break up immediately, King Razen”
“Yeah that would be the best.”
A man stood in front of King Razen with a huge Sword.
“Kenzo? This is Di-Blade.”
“Uhm yeah… Hi Di-blade”, kenzo said.
“Hello”, Di-blade answered cool as an ice cube.
”There are more of his strange friends”, thought Kenzo.
“And this is Zab.”
Kenzo started to look at a … stickmen?
“Who or what is this?”, kenzo asked.
Suddenly he felt something hard on his stomach.
“Don’t call me a stickmen.”
Kenzo cought.
“Hey you two, don’t fight.”
A person with a mysterious and strong aura said.
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#16
yay, i finally appeared :p
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#17
Not a bad chapter. Your transitions are good, it kept me reading, but at the end you kinda messed up with my char. Read my profile again. I was a stickman but I have been somehow transformed into a small boy.
Escape is a two-syllable word that grants temporary peace in the present to a future victim.
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#18
hmm yeah
but maybe you made some bad expierence as a stickman and you don't want to be remembered at this?
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#19
cool story, XD cool as an ice cube XD
If at first you don't succeed, you're probably not going skydiving again.
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#20
i'll let you some time to speculate how it goes on
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