The Secrets of the shadow Battles.

[Zabobula]

*waits somewhat patiently for the next chapter.

[Bamboori]

ACK release the next chapter,I can't wait anymore!

[Guigs]

yeh, lf2-hacker is taking too long

[Ascor]

Do you really find?
I had no time but i had thought about some good things xD
i was in cinema on friday then my friends and me were playing brawl all the night having no sleep
then we made some crazy things
At 16.00 i suddenly fell asleep (my friends were already at home)
sorry guys i'll try to release it ^^

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Chapter Three Who is this freakin guy?

“Ah yeah and this is…”, razen stopped.
Everybody in the room noticed IT.
“What the hell is that?”
“You’re so stupid”, zab said “It’s a big noise”
”Wow you must be a genius”, kenzo said really angry.
“Uhm, guys?”
“Yeah?”, everybody in the room asked.
“GET THE HELL OUTTA HERE!!!”, kenzo shouted, summoning a platform of glass under his feets.
Everybody was running, towards the door.
Di-Blade was running with his giant sword and trapped over his own feet.
Zab looked back, seeing Di-Blade with his giant sword.
He decided fast and a few seconds later he was near Di-Blade grabbing his arms and his sword and running as fast as he can.
A few seconds later, the wall where Di-Blade was lying 10 seconds before was crashed into itself.
“They’re coming”, razen said.



A few kilometres, in a gigantic forest, a men stand in front of an tree.
His two red Beamswords began glowing. With one hit, the tree was cutten up into half. “What a weak tree”, he said, looking for something harder.

Suddenly he saw somebody watching him from the shadow.
“Get the hell out off the shadows”, the men with the beamswords said.
The man with the hoe didn’t answered.
“Uhm if you won’t come to me… I’ll come to you!”, the man with the beamswords shouted, in the moment his swords began to glow again and the man was dashing forwards.
It’s seems like one movement to the man with the two beamswords, but suddenly the hoe of the other began twisting around him like bird.
“Wow what a genius defense,” the man with the swords said.
“What’s your name?” was the first sentence of the man with the hoe.
“It’s mailliw,” the man with the swords said.
“What an interesting name.”
“Yeah…”
Suddenly Mailliw began dashing forwards but the man with the hoe, suddenly disappeared.
“Who was this freakin guy?”, mailliw asked himself.
Not much over him a men with a hoe was hinted in a tree, watching him training again…

[SirFrog]

lol,

What a weak tree

Awesome quote!
And an awesome chapter.

[Ascor]

It's mailliw
the title of the chapter is supposed to have two meaning
The men with the hoe is the one freakin guy and the other one which is in the moment running with mh and the others, is the other guy

[Zabobula]

To be honest, I was kinda lost. What was going on in the first sequence of this chapter? What was the "big noise"? And did you take my advice and pre-write the story in Word first?

[Ascor]

Yes i re-write the story in word
and it is supposed to be left in the room
nobody knows what IT is ^^

[Ascor]

„Team Shadow leave IMEADIETLY“, razen shouted.
“Uhm, what is team shadow”
“You, and now LEAVE”


After Mailliw had no power left, the man with the hoe climbed down the tree.
“Now I’ll talk to you, mailliw”
Mailliw suddenly turned around, seeing the man with the hoe in front of the tree.
“I’ll beat your a** up.”
“Stupid boy. I haven’t done anything all the day and you have no power left.”
“No matter what I beat you”
Mailliw looked crimson into the other mens eye.
“At the end of the day you’ll be dead.”
“And why? I just wanna talk.”
“Cause there are no trees left here and I need some real training.”

Team shadow was leaving the castle trough an huge hole inside the castle wall.
Their direction was a near big forest.
They heard a weak sound, inside the forest and everyone stayed alert.
“Hey there’s a chance for a fight”, kenzo said.
“Oh my goodness”
“What are you saying zabo?”
“It’s commander guigs… and he is very injured”, zabo shouted.
“Come on guys”

[Zabobula]

You really need to take your time with these chapters man. This one was good but it was way too short and have you been prewriting at all?