phoenixlady sprite

[lf2TimmE1]

phoenixlady is my very first sprite ..she is a little bit thinner than the original chars but in my opinion it is not the worst sprite of a newcomer^^.
ok....i want to see some helpful suggestions in this thread..thats all...
P.S. epic..first thread...here is the link ..sry that u have to download
phoenixlady: http://www.savefile.com/files/1907891

[Bamboori]

imageshack is your friend
to the sprite: very good, only thing i would have to complain abut that the sprite isnt lf2-styled.

kinda reminds me on dubbled's thread

[Hukko]

lol. not lf2-styled and i don't like this sprite, sorry.

[Guigs]

doesn't really fit lf2 style, but it's awesome, i think it should be in the art section.
By the way, do you tried to do her in a lf2 style? Try it, usee someee photoshop or gimp, and will look 10000% better.

keep it up

[XSasukeXS]

sorry i dont like it:

its not lf2 styled

and she looks wired...

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Guigs how much GB does PhotoShop Takes?

[Ascor]

Guigs how much GB does PhotoShop Takes?

you gonna buy it?
Wow will cost more then 200 euro

[lf2TimmE1]

ok...whether there is a lot of criticism (sadly often unhelpful) i'm going to keep work up on phoenixlady and try to make her more lf2 styled

[Ascor]

try to make the structur clearer
all i see now is (sadly) a bunch of ecstasy sprites

[lf2TimmE1]

that was fast ....are u all the time on lfe....^^

[Silverthorn]

that was fast ....are u all the time on lfe....^^

hehe, seems like it

My comment: ok, it's not lf2-styled, we've said that often enough. The sprite, however, reminds me really of Legolas by DubbleD, it's nearly the same style :P
What you should work on a little more is the shading. There isn't terribly much effort spent on shading, or maybe there is, but you can't see it
Her left foot looks a little strange to me; I can't really describe it but it kinda looks unnatural to me.

Assuming that you took Paint to create the sprite, I'd recommend some more advanced program to you, since the transitions between the colors look a little too sharp. You should blur the sprite a tiny bit. Not too much, though, we don't want a "ghost" :P