phoenixlady sprite

[Silverthorn]

that was fast ....are u all the time on lfe....^^

hehe, seems like it

My comment: ok, it's not lf2-styled, we've said that often enough. The sprite, however, reminds me really of Legolas by DubbleD, it's nearly the same style :P
What you should work on a little more is the shading. There isn't terribly much effort spent on shading, or maybe there is, but you can't see it
Her left foot looks a little strange to me; I can't really describe it but it kinda looks unnatural to me.

Assuming that you took Paint to create the sprite, I'd recommend some more advanced program to you, since the transitions between the colors look a little too sharp. You should blur the sprite a tiny bit. Not too much, though, we don't want a "ghost" :P

[Ascor]

Totaly agree with bp use photofiltre or something other programm
btw:
I AM most of my time at lfe

[lf2TimmE1]

ok..thx for feedback ...and here is the new more lf2 styled version: http://www.savefile.com/files/1908394
P.S. she is now named as phoenixgirl

[Ascor]

looks better then the old version but you need a bit more powerfull colours
and give her a bh cause not in every position the hairs are in this position

[Silverthorn]

please, do me a favor and use some image host instead of posting savefile-links.... makes it easier & faster for us to rate, give criticism, etc.


Again, the shading is strange. I can't really see where you put the light source in order to set the highlights/shadows. I think, you need to put a little circle representing your light source into a corner (just for spriting, though). Although, it's just a dot, it makes correct shading much easier (at least for me)

[Hypermodder]

Yes, here are some guys who dontwanna download that stuff.


Therefore you can use image-tags!

Code:

[IMG][/IMG]

Upload your stuff and put the pic's url between the imagetags.

[zxcv11791]

Who cares if its not LF2 style? If you want to do something different then go for it.

I would suggest putting a bra on your phoenix girl, and you need a lot of work shading.

-the light off the legs are going in different directions
-light of the arms are going in different directions as well
-chest area is too dark in comparison to the legs and arms
-her shorts/panties are shaded very oddly. Don't use stripes unless you're going for a metalic shade.
-make the tail go behind the her legs instead of in between

[lf2TimmE1]

here is the new improved version of phoenixgirl...and u don't have to download anymore^^ http://img390.imageshack.us/img390/6739/...irlhc5.png

[Gad]

Who cares if its not LF2 style? If you want to do something different then go for it.

Hmmm, it's LF2 SPRITES SECTION, HELLO!
If he is publishing sprites in this section they should be LF2 Styled, don't you think?

[Ascor]

looks better now
but she still needs a bh