12-26-2008, 05:44 AM
well then....get on with it
If at first you don't succeed, you're probably not going skydiving again.
The Secrets of the shadow Battles.
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12-26-2008, 05:44 AM
well then....get on with it
If at first you don't succeed, you're probably not going skydiving again.
ok
seems like i had school troubles but for now i'll write Let me hear you want the story You want it?
01-20-2009, 07:12 PM
"I won't fight gainst a girl", kenzo said.
"Then you have to capture her", zab sounded really pissed off. "How should I?" "Maybe using your glass?" "Watch and learn", Di-Blade said looking crimson at her. Zabs eyes begann glowing in a deep mystical red. "Kinda hypnotising", kenzo thought. He was unable to move. "Hey zab what's that", kenzo shouted panicly. "You looked into his eyes right?" "Idiot", with this word zab stopped his mental cage. Kenzo felt right to the ground. "haha your great", the girl laughed. "huh", she shouted irritated. Di-Blade stood in front of her and had cutten her sword into half. "What will you do now", blade asked. "Still to slow", she wispered, jumping away from him sending a palm to him. Blade was pushed to the ground. "That's enough", zab said looking at Blades bloody body. He was unconscious. "No solo attempts", zab said without moving his lipps. "I can't see his lipps moving", kenzo thought. "I am in your mind" "What?! Get out of my private things!" "It's our greatest advantage to give us warnings so she isn't hearing it." "And there's definitly no other way?" "Blade is unconscious and you ruined the mental cage... nothing left", zab replied. "We have to do this on the sweet old method" "I hate this job" "Really?" "Kinda" "Indeed?" "Stop that!"
01-20-2009, 07:21 PM
lol awesome.. but its more funny than yeah... whatever
cool story anyways
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Mailliw jumped. It was a simple jump but the ground was damaged around him. He shlashed with his two swords where the men stood.
"He isn't moving", mailliw thought. "Irritated? What's the problem?" The other guy said. Suddenly he disapeared. "Never stop moving", mailliw heard, feeling the cold steel on his throat. "For now we have a pat", the men said. "Forgive me my ignorance but i have no weapon to use." "I have the weapon you the information." "Now", mailliw thought. Mailliw disappeared in a cloud. "huh? No fair! Stop hiding", the men twisted around at 180°. "come on", the men throwed the hoe after mailliw. Mailliw disappeard with a <poof>. "A clone?" "Never stop moving", mailliw said and putted the sword on the throat of the men. "Nice, mailliw, nice..." In the forest the battle was at his highest point. Everyone dashed around. "Argh", zab shouted. The connection between theyr mind disappeared. He looked around seeing zab full of blood lying on the ground. "f***!" With an explosion of power kenzo created a huge dome shaped building. The enemy was outside. "One problem less", di-blade said. "Hey you are back from death", kenzo said. "Looks like it." "I'll heal you" Kenzo said the spell and he immeadietly fell an strong pain. Healing was so. Pain for healing. He got the pain. Blade the healing. He was nearly out of power... everything went black. The wind bleewed strong over the battlefield. "Nuramon", razen shouted. A men in a black coat and an emblem which symbolised that he was a wizzard appeared. "Master?" "How much soldiers have we left?" "Nearly 1000" "Not good. We had 6352 at the beginning. and they only 3000!" Razen was sad because he killed ryuzoko. He was right... "Leave now!" "Yes, Sir"
01-20-2009, 08:06 PM
wow two another cool chapters.. awesome as ever.
but mh is a little bit to cruel in your story..
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01-30-2009, 09:11 PM
he is cruel i doubt
in real life o_O he is someone who kills flys with deo+fire in my story [/joking] no i just doesnt wanted to make a king all good like "oh it's a royal king in white... look how strong he looks" i wanted to show that even the greatest sometimes break and become the monsters they're fighting against
01-31-2009, 09:05 AM
What is that girl...?
If at first you don't succeed, you're probably not going skydiving again.
01-31-2009, 10:17 AM
it's who is she?
I'm havent really deciced yet but maybe he is going to be a member of shadow but she could be a spy from another king too Let's surprise you |
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