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[char] Etjia
#11
Its kinda hard to criticize someones own art style because it is what they were aiming for, all I can really say is that the feet look disproportionate. Also the sword handle looks a bit funny to me.

Shading and character design looks really good though.


~Chishio
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#12
To Chishio
I do those feet all the time nothing wrong there - also I know what you mean by criticizing someone elses work... rolleyes
Also you are right about something the Sword Handle will be edited...
I can't do the actual Sword's Cloth they look lumpy??? rolleyes
Can someone help me fix them...

I said "Hell with It" and just used Bats Colors (shoes)
[Image: unfinnished_Etjia2.gif]
All I did was change the Swords cloth color
Shaded his pants and shoes...
Can somebody plz help me with the right way how to do cloths?? or bandages, wrappings???
:(
:D LOL (I'm serious by the way...)
From the looks of it I may have done the shading wrong too... rolleyes
sigh*
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#13
now he has better shoes,
i think ill help with the sword cloth later (cuz right now i am sick).
btw, nice char design.

im going to sleep a few mins later, since its 350021 p.m here(lol just joking, im not going to sleep)
Making a Ben 10 Mod. If you wanna help, feel free to pm me. I need help with sprites. >Ben 10 LF2<
Credits to Silver from lf2-global for the avatar

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#14
Alright, Thanks... ^^
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#15
reall ythe shoes look better now nice worknothin wrong here unlike chishio said.
"I'm the president of the shadow government
The grand governor of the federal reserve
Public enemy of the society
The one you cannot see the thirty three degree"
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#16
If you guys can tell I smeared it (nothing much...)
Not Smeared [Image: unfinnished_Etjia2.gif] Smeared[Image: etjia_smear.gif]
I'll post more on this thread also changing the name - later...
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Ok dang I really like the smeared version. Is there anyway though that you can overlay the outline of the non-smeared one on to the smeared one to give it something solid?

~Chishio
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#18
Are u talking about the sword?
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(02-19-2009, 07:51 PM)KaywonnJuto Wrote:  Are u talking about the sword?

His right arm seems to be sticking out, and if his body was meant to be looking towards the player and his head looking to the side then remove the right armpit line lol
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Oh yeh I see it...
I saw this mistake but didn't know what to think about it...
cause it's part of the ripped shirt... rolleyes
Yeah the arms should be vise versa...
I'll fix it soon...
(I just post my sprites on threads then never really finnish it... :P)
(but recently haven't been doing anything at home...)
so yeah - i'll finnish it... ;)
thanks guys...
Looks a little messy don't it rolleyes
[Image: etjia_edit.gif]
I just fixed a few things and adjusted the arm a bit by 2 pixels then blurred/smeared it ^^
mostly (burned) it [meaning darked it on GIMP]
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