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[sprite] Tiser
#1
this is Tiser my first character:
whats better the first 1 or the second 1?
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[Image: tisero.png]
plz rate

here are movies of walking and standing of Tiser:
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Some things you should work on (in my opinion):
-New/edited weapon.
-Edit the 'extra' hair to improve it a little (e.g. add the original shading of LouisEX' hair) and 'attach' it to the already existing hair. I might upload an example if you need one.
-There are some 'dirty' pixels on the pants. Clean them up.

I really, really like the idea of a LouisEX with long hair though :D
I can't say it's good yet (hey, I'm honest and trying to help you ;)), but it's got potential.
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(03-10-2009, 07:15 PM)JossuaDC Wrote:  -Edit the 'extra' hair to improve it a little (e.g. add the original shading of LouisEX' hair) and 'attach' it to the already existing hair. I might upload an example if you need one.

plz show me an exmpale.

and ill clean the pixles
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Hey, you've already edited it!
Lol xD

I was talking of a new 'top' for the weapon (I'll show it in the example), not changing it to a dagger ;p
You've already cleaned up some of the spots on the pants, so good job there.
And what you've done to the hair is small, but it has a big effect.

This is just my opinion, but different people have different opinions!
Look at what others say, but only change something if you feel good about it yourself too ;)

I'll try to get the example up in an hour or two (might not make it in time - I'm busy :/ ).

Edit: I love your design for the dagger though :o (please tell me it's a dagger before I make a complete fool of myself xD)
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uptaded ^^

Edit: its dagger dont worry.
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What are the blue stripes? ;p
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you know some thing cool for the shirt so it wont look dry.

beacuase only red is boring.
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He should hold the dagger... "Cooler"
Like Deep holding his sword.
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ok... more and more newcomers doing sprites.. that good ;)

i like idea (wich i think is louisEX with dagger), but you should add something more specific like strange boot or a cap (i can't tell right now- no ideas..sry).

but 4 a newman- 7.5/10 ;)
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what do you meen by cap?

and should i make of this sprite a character?
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