[Char] Arcanis

[dubbleD]

teal =D
greenish blue
bluey green

[neo261]

What a good idea to do this char!

[~Dome~]

Maybe you thought I´m not working but I just haven´t post the progress, you can see it in my siggy btw. I just don´t want to post every single frame, when I finished the first spritesheet, I post it.

Done a simple Face, critics pls

[Lauli]

Dunno if drawing a face from scratch is a very good idea... :confused:

Turn around the hood a bit, the nose and the mouth should be redone completely...
Maybe you can take John or Sorcerer as base.

[~Dome~]

Dunno if drawing a face from scratch is a very good idea...

Well, take Davis, turn him and look on him, what do you see? :P
I took Davis as base

Well, will redo the nose+mouth

[plankton]

wasn't it ur b'day some time ago?
anyway back to topic,
i don't like the black outline around his body and hat
and there's lighter shade on his cheeks but his hat should've made darker shade

[~Dome~]

Thx, I will edit it into the post then..
And yea my b-day is tomorrow


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[Silverthorn]

I dunno about his shoulders....especially the left shoulder looks like it is non-existent... I think it shoud be a bit higher...
Also, it looks like you did the hood with lines. It looks realy edgy...
The shading is pretty good, although you could try to remove the borders between the colors by blurring them a bit.
The rest is nice, though

[~Dome~]

k thx for the improvments..


> maybe a ball, don´t know..

Critics?

[Lauli]

You should add more randomness to the ball, otherwise I'd add a "core" to it, look at Julians soul bomb for instance.

Yes and like usually, don't like the colour :P