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[Char[project]]Normal Man
#1
Here is my char:
[Image: caranormalfb.png]
[Image: caranormalsb.png]
[Image: caranormal0b.png]
[Image: caranormal1b.png]
but I'm not very good with sprites ...
and I need another name
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#2
to be honest, this is one of the worst C&P chars I've ever seen... you should try again^^
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#3
It is okay (this is to not let you down:D) the name is very weird.and his face is really weird too,change something more.
Feel free to check out My Sprites
"A mistake is simply another way of doing things."
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#4
i agree with TheNave.... you just can't paste it no matter how it looks.... yo have to fix some parts with hair.... and dots around him should be erased
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#5
This is not a good character imo, but don't sweat it. Everyone makes a couple bad characters when they're starting out. Besides. I'm biased... I don't like Jack's hair lol.
Henry David Thoreau Wrote:
Let your life be a counter-friction to stop the machine.
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#6
I would recommend going over the copying and pasting you've done to
fix it up a bit, particularly:

-The 'dirty' pixels (coloured dots in the picture that are floating randomly
in the black background)
-The missing Gloves/Hands in a couple of frames.
-And just re-ajust the Vest in some of the frames too
(Notably the "oww, my stomach" frames ;))
-And move the hair up a bit in some frames (where you can see the
top of the bandana)

But its not bad for a first effort ;)

As for the name, how about Ralph or Anthony?
Trust you're all well.
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