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Manji and Z where both in a shadow world that they were traveling but now they were stuck. Manji ran towards him and got behind him really quick but before he could attack him Z turned back and punched Manji so hard that Manji fell back about 5 meters. Manji stood up and said, "Well I guess I have to summon my dark side too." Then he threw his sword away and from the shadows he drew another sword it looked more like a hell sword but much stronger. The whole battlefield turned black that even Manji's eye's glowing wasn't seen."Mhh, The Crimson One, I was hoping to fight you," said Manji but in much darker voice."You should have kept the ring on Z's hand and I wouldn't come into this body."
"But I would miss all of the fun." Manji attacked The Crimson One not just one side but 6 different side, up, front, back, left, right, down. Only one attack hit The Crimson One. Then Z attacked Manji but he dodged it and tried to attack him but Z dodged the counter attack and countered it back. Manji then sent shadow balls at him but he simply absorbed them. Even thought neither of them could see each other they fought as there was bright light.

Okay Zabobula can you continue on this.
Manji can die in this battle but I will make him back alive, okay.
Mwuhahaha, lol
I am back, not really.
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I am soooo…taking advantage of this opportunity. XD

Z’s power began rising and he began overbearing Manji with wave after wave of attacks. Eventually, Manji caved under the tremendous pressure his attacks was putting on him. He collapsed down to his knees and that made for the opening Z quickly took advantage of. Manji looked up to see a glowing palm right in front of his face. This was the first time Manji ever screamed in pain. The blast from Z’s palm sent him flying for several yards. He crash landed after being suspended in the air for several seconds.
“This is unbelievable,” Manji thought to himself as he staggered upward, still on his back. “How can this man have so much power?”
Z walked towards him slowly, with both of his hands glowing a fiery purple. Manji had only one final question he could muster out.
“What are you?”
Z held out his hand yet again aiming for what remained of Manji. “A demon, but not of this world.”
With that said, he let loose a blast that diminished the shadowy arena they had fallen into. The blast carried Manji through a forest until it finally exploded almost half a mile away. His screams could be heard all the way to the fiery explosion which leveled most of the forest. Z stood laughing maniacally. He still felt obligated to capturing Noir so he took off once again.
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Sonidow felt that strange wind yet again. But this time it was even worse. Drahcir could not feel it but he knew something bad had happened.
Escape is a two-syllable word that grants temporary peace in the present to a future victim.
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Well are you happy Zabobula, but soon you will fell the wrath of dark Manji and he will obliterate you, hehe.


Second Manji
Manji was dieing on the ground, he was covered in blood and spewed blood from his mouth every half minuet.
"You ware too weak even with the shadow sword."
"Shut up, I won't let you take over my body again."
"I know, but, you are so weak you couldn't even let him bleed."
"Shut up! Even you won't kill him."
"What are you talking about, I'm much more powerful then him, it will be an excellent match."
"Even if I would let you take over my body you would kill everybody and take over this world."
"No, I have other reasons to take your body, first is to avenge you, second is to heal you because he weaned so much that you can barely breathe."
"Fine, just don't kill them okay."
"Who the demon or the humans."
"Both they must survive, just don't use your sacred power okay."
"Fine, when I will defeat the demon and Z, I will put the ring on Z hand so he will lose the demon and return him to the other world."
"So we made a deal, you can take over me but when you have done with Z and the demon I will take over this body again."
"Okay well here I go."
Nothing really happen to Manji except that all of his wounds healed and his eye's weren't red glowing they were similar to The Crimson One eye's but glowing.
Manji smiled and blasted off into the sky.

Sorry for cursing I hope it's not deadly.
Soon The Crimson One will fall.
I am back, not really.
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OOC: Sorry, just had to quote that... Btw: Pretty good work by both of you :D
(08-26-2009, 12:25 AM)Pi-Face Wrote:  Also I wrote this story as I was writing it.


Light filled the whole world around Cen and he had to close his eyes for not becoming blind. However he could see it even through his closed eyelids. Motionless he stayed where he was, waiting. After some seconds the light slowly faded. He opened his eyes.
And looked at a dark tree in front of his nose. On his left side he noticed both Philus and Mailliw.
“What did Manji do? We were so close and now he warped us away!” Philus vented his anger.
“He probably had a good reason for it. You heard it, we can't defeat Julian without Noir.” Mailliw annotated.
“And what did he do? Rescuing him but leaving us no choice but to retreat. We can decide on our own.”
“He just wanted the best for us. Maybe some day you will thank him.”
“I don't care what he wanted. I won't let anybody decide about I do.”
Nobody answered anything.
“Anyway, what are we going to do now? Going back to the castle? To help Manji and Noir? Or joining the army which should soon be here?” Cen interfered.
“Going back I would say. We can't do much against those powers.”
“Sometimes little things make the difference. And too much is at hazard to leave anything untried.” Cen threw in.
“What does that guy think about us anyway? Together we are surely strong enough to beat that redhead.”
Mailliw wanted to response as suddenly another dome of light appeared. All of them had to close their eyes. As it faded again, Noir was standing in front of them.
“Prince Noir! What has happened.?”
“Manji and I were about to defeat that redheaded man. But then something took him over. I can't tell what it was... Something not from this world. He and Manji are fighting now.”
“So what are we gonna do?”
“Nothing. Powers we can't defeat are at work. All we can do is waiting.”
“We can't do anything?”
Noir nodded.
“I can't believe that. Manji needs our help for defeating him. We have to get back to the castle.”
Noir shook his head.
“There are more important things to do. The army has to be warned, they walk into their extinction.”
Now Philus exploded.
“No! I'm not going to turn around now. There might be nothing we can do, but we at least have to try it. What if we can?”
“Calm down, Philus. I can understand you, but you have to accept that the result of that fight is not in your hands.”
“Why did we come here anyway then?”
Noir took out a red tea leaf from a bag hanging on his back.
“Let's drink some tea to get our minds clear again.”
He put the tea leaf on the ground and took out his water bottle. As Cen was about to heat it with his fire, they heard a giant explosion. They turned around and saw the forest near the castle firend being ablaze.
“Whoever has won, someone needs our help. Let's go.”
With this words all except Noir ran into the direction the explosion had come from. Noir followed a few seconds later after putting the tea leaf in his bag again and sighing.
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First of all Reaper let me tell something, first of all Manji doesn't want to save Z he want's The Crimson One to go back to his planet.
Also try to not write so many short chapters.

Ah, soft, soft grass. Man I wish I had that type of grass at my backyard, but right now isn't time to thinks about this grass, right now I must know where I am.So I stood up and looked around where I was. It looked like a forest but how can I be in the forest when I was outside in Virginia. And it doesn't feel hot. Maybe I'm somewhere, no no no. I can't be somewhere in Virginia, also what is that strange bracelet on my hand. It looks like one of the sticks that glow in the dark, but it glows right now, it's a perfect circle like it was made on my hand, and I feel some strange power inside it.I looked and I saw some land that looks like there was an explosion near the lake . I started walking towards it and thought.How can I be here and what is this bracelet. Okay, time to think of possible things. Hmm, only one idea come to my mind is that I'm in a another dimension in a world far away with magical powers and similar stuff.When I reached the explosion area it felt cool but still as it was made couple of hours ago or days. Then I saw some foot prints, and they looked like a humans.I should follow them maybe I can find a town or people that can help me. I started walking towards the foot prints, and looked at the landscape.Man is this beautiful, uhh I wish they had this type of forest in Virginia. I walked ours before seeing a town. When I reached the town it looked so medieval. I thought where to go, and the best place is the tavern, so I started looking for one.Man my cloths look so weird in here, but it might just help.The words and everything looked in English, and people talked in English. Then I found the tavern.

Okay that's all for me, Elias. Also can some one write short about how he founds some one like Alec or any of the main char in the story just a short and make him playful and not all to confused okay.
Time for Sophie.

Ah. Where am I? Hm, it looks like some forest, and a beautiful one.I looked around and found I was somewhere far away from Virginia., or America. The I looked at my hair and the color of them changed.That's strange first I'm in some where unknown and the landscape that I never see before or heard to have that during winter, also my hair color changed from brown to red and I feel some strange power inside me. I stood up and took one more look. Then I saw some weird shape far away and it looked like a human walking away from me. I started running towards him but I couldn't get near him, maybe it's because it was far away.I guess I should just walk, maybe it is going some village or a town. This place looks so weird, maybe I'm in some other world. My older brother always says that nothing is impossible. Maybe it's true that I'm in another world. Well The only thing I should just find a village, maybe some one could help. After some hours of walking I could see a town. I was so happy to see a town. So I started walking faster. After some more time I was in front gates of the town. I went inside and looked around. It looked so medieval. I started walking around the town hopping I could find some one familiar or that could help me.

Okay here I end hope you like it and nobody please write about Sophie, but can write how I (Elias) finds some main chat.(just like I said before)
I am back, not really.
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Daymio was sitting on the tree... He saw Noir and others running towards explosion... Noir was behind them and he was putting something in the bag....
Others passed next to Daymio without seeing him....
He jumped from the tree right in front of Noir...

"You are mine now... Nothing will stop me killing you now..."

"Daymio!!?? Stop... You don't have to do this... It doesn't have to be like this... Please... Stop..."

"Yes it have to be like this... You are only one who can make me be normal again... Make me be human..."

"What?! W-what are you talking about... What do you mean i can make you human again?"

"Through your veins is flowing your grandfathers blood... He was Great Shaman. Only he had power to turn vampires in to humans. You have that power... But you are to weak to control it... So only your blood can help me... In first this was just another quest... But when i found out this... It became personal... That's why you must die!" - Daymio said and pulled out sword from his back. "Let's finish this once for all."

Daymio rushed on Noir.

Noir closed his eyes and prepared for the worse.
Daymio jumped...

Suddenly big purple ball hits Daymio and he falls 10 feet from Noir.

"What??!!" - Noir was looking around him confused.

He felt pain all around his body. Like someone is tbinding him.
Julian appeared in front of him.

"Hello Noir. Muhahahahaha."

"Nooo!!! Let me go!!!"

"I think Daymio already told you about your grandfather... You have his powers... And now... They are gonna be MINE!!!!!" - Julian yell's and catch's Noir by the trough.

"No you won't!" - Daymio get's up and trows knife towards Julian.
Julian catch knife with his other hand and crush it like a glass. He shot another ball on Daymio. Daymio fall's on the ground wounded.

"And now... It's time to became invincible!!!"

Julian puts his hand in to Noir like trough water.
Noir yelled so hard that even Cen and others heard him on the battle field. Purple light was glowing all to the sky.
Light became smaller and smaller until it finally disappeared.
Cen and others ran toward purple light. Cen came there first and saw Noir kneeling on the ground and Daymio about 20 feet behind him.
Noir got up. His eyes were purple.

"I did it... I finally did it... I am invincible... Muhahahaha... No one can't stop me now..." - Noir said with some strange voice.

Cen was looking him confused - "No it can't be... Julian??!! He got Noir's body! No! How did this happen??!! " - he yelled. -
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!"
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Everything was black.
Soon his eyes got familiar with the darkness.
There was no moon over the camp of the army.
Somewhere a wolf wailed.
Somewhere a men stayed in the shadows.
This men had short brown hair and was wearing glasses.
"Getting out of the army-camp is harder than actually getting in", he whispered.
Suddenly he heard a sound.
"No longer talking to myself or else i will get caught", he thought.
He walked trough the tents.
He looked around a corner and saw the fire and the guards.
"If i'll stay out of the fires shine they won't see me."
He looked back to the tents of the other guys.
"Sorry guys... i'll come back and back you up."
And so he got out of the army-camp, traveled trough the forest and finally came to his goal.


Would come up with more but i don't feel like.
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Well Hacker I'm glad that you wrote something even thought it's short and confusing.

Brother and Sister.

Elias
Now I think that going to a tavern wasn't a good idea, well if I'm here I should talk to the owner of this tavern. I started walking towards the bar. There was some fat guy cleaning a bear cup. "Excuse me, sir do you can you tell me of some events that happen here." I asked the man. "Well, lad what type of events do you want to know?"
"Hmm, how about something big, you know that every one heard of."
"Hm, let me see, ah yes there is one thing."
"Well, what is it."I asked him with real interest.
"I heard that some people are making an army to attack a castle called Firend." The fat man said.
"That's all?" I said in a down voice. "Well I heard rumors that there is a great evil inside the castle, people mention a person named Julian."
"Wait, is he with big armor with dark purple hair and a mask on his face?" Asked the man. "Well yes, that's what I heard, but it's just rumors." After that the man took a order from some guy with armor.
That's really strange. How is Julian from is in here. I thanked the man and leaved the tavern.

Sophie
Ah, I'm walking in circles in this town maybe I should leave. Then I saw some boy walking out of tavern, he had modern looking cloth that ware weird looking in this world and he has green eye's that looked a little like swamp and has really similar hair style as my brother. I started walking towards him and he was looking at the sky. When I was couple of decimeters away from him and said. "Hello" with a smile. "Hi" the boy said. "Excuse me, but what is your name?"
"Oh my name is Elias, Elias Stadnyk." The boy said. What, how is that possible. Okay just have to calm my self. "I have one more question, do you have a younger sister."
"Yes her name is Sophie, and how did you know to question me that?"
"Because I'm you younger sister."

Yep really weird and short well I hope it didn't bored you to death.
I am back, not really.
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OOC: I hope I didn't screw up with painting Daymio's personality. But that is how I think of him.

They all tensely watched the body of Noir in front of them, stunned. No one knew what to do. On the right-hand side Cen noticed Daymio, intently looking at Noir like they did.
Noir, or Julian he corrected himself, was motionless looking down. Suddenly he began to laugh, first with a low voice, then getting louder and louder. He slowly rose his head, looking at them with two deep purple eyes. Flames were burning in them, showing pure evilness.
“Thank you Noir. With your help I will finally enslave this world.”
He looked at the group standing in front of him.
“Noble as I am, I will leave you alive. Use your last days in freedom wise.”
Saying this Julian suddenly disappeared. Nothing indicated that he had been there just a few seconds ago. Slowly the fighters began to realize what had happened. Julian had taken Noir's body and with it the might in his veins, now becoming invincible. Was this the end?
After some time they began to think clear again. There had to be a way to defeat Julian. And they would find it. What else could they do? As their thoughts began to circle, Philus headed to Daymio who was about to leave.
“Wait!”
Daymio prepared for a fight, but Philus didn't even attempted to get ready for it.
“I don't want to fight you. I want to ask you a question.”
Still watching every single movement of Philus carefully, Daymio began to relax.
“Look, I don't want to kill you. But I am interested in knowing why you don't want to be a vampire anymore.”
“Why? Because the light of the sun jails me into caves and houses. Because everywhere I go people look at me as if I came directly from hell. They kill us because we are different. But now the situation has twisted. Now I am killing them.”
“So you are fighting madness with madness.”
“Call it like you want, revenge... rationality... madness. But they don't deserve any better fate.”
Philus looked at him with something like mercy in his eyes. In front of him stood a murder, but what he saw was a man who had never seen the good sides of life and wasn't able to show them to anyone.
“Not every human is like that.”
Daymio said nothing.
“So why do you want to become a human?”
“Sometimes... Sometimes I think things could be different. Sometimes I think I could stop this madness by just getting out of its range. By living a normal life. I don't know if it really is like that. But I want to try it. For what else could I fight?”
Before Philus could reply anything, Mailliw intervened.
“I'm sorry to disrupt you, but could there be time for that later? For now we have to find a way to kill Julian.”
“Well, seemingly we have the same enemy now. Will you help us defeating Julian, Daymio?”
Daymio nodded resolutely.
“Let's go.”
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The news had gotten to Z that Julian had taken over Noir’s body and become even more powerful. One of Julian’s servants, Mihara, had found him taking refuge in the forest. She truly was a symbol of Julian’s influence as everything on her, except her skin and eye color, was purple. Her dress extended down to her ankles where she wore purple high-heels. Her eyes were hazel and had the impression of deceit and mischief. (From Z’s perspective anyways)
“Well now, how interesting to find the ‘Crimson One’ cowering behind some bushes.”
Z came from out of the darkness into small rays of light barely making his face visible. “What do you want, wench?”
“I am Julian’s messenger, he sent me to get an answer from you.”
“I’m listening.” Z said taking a few steps closer to the woman clothed in purple garb.
Z stopped a few feet away from her, but then Mihara began taking small steps toward the redhead. Her eyes lowered in a sultry manner and she smirked slightly as she walked past him on his left side. They were both facing each others sides; Z looked forward while Mihara turned her eyes on him.
“Since you lost the ring that Julian gave to you, you have lost your ability to separate yourself from your inner ‘being’. But do you also realize that because you lost the ring, you have also become an enemy of Julian?”
“I am well aware of that.” Z responded.
“You do realize he can come after you at any time, correct?” Mihara added.
Z was getting frustrated the longer she continued to ask him questions. The rays of light began dimming as the sun hid behind a cluster of clouds in the sky barely seen through the thick and heavy foliage of the forest. Mihara felt something strange being in Z’s presence as she noticed the quickly dimming rays. She pressed the issue as fast as she could as she began to feel uncomfortable.
“Well?”
“I’m actually glad that I lost that damn ring. It made me weaker than I am now.”
Z’s response quickly grabbed Mihara’s attention. The redhead continued…
“When I and the being inside me separated for the first time, I was relieved to have that spirit outside of my body. I was happy to have new power that was now my own, but…”
Mihara’s increased interested prompted her to expedite an answer out of Z. “But what?”
“But, it wasn’t the same. Or rather, it wasn’t as strong as the power that I felt with the being inside of me. It made me feel weak and depressed. And I also learned a truth that I have come to grips with.”
Z looked at Mihara now who suddenly eased back. “Tell Julian to reconsider coming after me.”
Mihara’s face quickly turned to disgust. “You think you’re stronger than Lord Julian? He’d crush you in an instant.”
“If that’s the case,” Z began turning to face Mihara completely, “then tell him that I will come after him myself, when the time comes.”
Mihara glared at Z and gritted her teeth. Her hands slowly moved behind her back and Z quickly sprung into action taking her to the ground.
As Z positioned himself over her, holding her hands that were now holding small daggers, he smirked and said. “You’re a loyal servant to your master, Mihara, I’ll give you that. I will spare your life if you go and deliver my message to him.”
Mihara lowered her head and nodded. “Fine.”
Z rose off of her and let her get up. Mihara dusted herself off and looked at the redheaded man with unusual concern. He turned and walked away from the woman in purple.
“I hope that you’ll come to your senses before it’s late for you.” Mihara said as Z continued to walk into the shadows of the forest.
“I hope that I do as well, for both our sakes.”
Mihara was confused by his last statement but realized that he wasn’t talking about him and her. She smiled slightly and took off into the distance.
Escape is a two-syllable word that grants temporary peace in the present to a future victim.
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