New Sprite(s) - XLittlebob252

[XLittlebob252]

this is a sprite im working on might be called jet for avatar mod
and now im practicing everyday.

[Elias]

Uhh. That's not Jet. First of all he has dark brown hair, second he has red instead of orange and he looks weird for Jet.
(I'm an exfan of Avatar so don't even fight with me.

[prince_freeza]

k this last one i didnt like for a reason i dont know.

[XLittlebob252]

yeah baby im back and i see an really big improvment in my sprites
after tons of days not talking or spriting to this forum
here is a little sprite i just made and i really like it:

[Simoneon]

Wow, you're back with those amazing sprites.

Well, you're becoming an uber spriter. Maybe you need to ''come back to see us in this forum'' more often. If you know what I mean.

Only the thing I don't like are the body proportions. Somehow they're weird.

[XLittlebob252]

you meen the stance?

[snorsorbet]

No, proportions is the size of a part of the body compared to the other parts.

[Silverthorn]

I felt so free pointing out the proportion-issues:

oh noez, now everybody knows how I write :o

Well, what does this diagram want to say?
~ your char is 2px higher than Jack. Not THAT important, but...
~ ...the chin is too high-up
~ the waist is 2 px too high-up again

Also, without looking at the proportions, your char seems to "fall" towards the front. His legs remind me of the first falling-sprite of any char. He should be more upright.

Anyways, pretty well shaded etc. Oh, and welcome back

[XLittlebob252]

nah i usually use 1px but i blur and also some why when i upload to lfe it blurs to me more O_O
and thanks
P.S its my first time making scratch legs.

[Alectric]

omg your still alive?
the only problem have is that arms look a little short, and pants are way too big and look like he is in mid stride :P