New Sprite(s) - XLittlebob252

[XLittlebob252]

this 1 is made out of scratch

hope you guys like it

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oh man no 1 commented (sorry for double post)

[Alectric]

he's got no chin
he's pretty plain of a character
the hair needs to be a bit more detailed in my opinion
same with the face
i dont really like his pants either...just the way they are shaded i guess, and also the colour.

how about something a little more original? -instead of just one person standing there with some weird clothes
like i dont know, a new stance? weapons?

[XLittlebob252]

i didint really had much time because i had to move so i made this sprite in 10 minutes:

hope you like it.

[snorsorbet]

Don't rush your spriting
There are many flaws in this sprite. For an instance, look at the shaded part of the hair. It isn't textured.
The clothes look like they are pillow shaded (especially the pants), and the eyes look generaly wierd. His upper body is bigger than his lower body.
And I don't know about his pose, there is something 'wrong' about it, you know these kind of things you just can't point out.

Don't get me wrong, you have improved a great lot
Just give yourself some more time and try to develop getting proportions right :P

[Alectric]

the main problem i am having with your sprites is the eyes...they are just a 2pxl vertical line.
eyes are meant to be round, or bigger than what you usually do.
also, the mouth and nose are a little to dark, maybe use a lighter shade.

[XLittlebob252]

i suck at making face...

[Simoneon]

i suck at making face...

Then you can simply work on it.

Also, I think that you have a good spriting style, though.
And yeah, don't rush your spriting, take your time, and maybe then you won't be so ''sucky'' on the sprites.

[XLittlebob252]

the last sprite i rushed cause i really had to move and i knew i will lose the idea if i will leave.

[XLittlebob252]

hey i came back to check if i still sprite good and maybe you guys can comment on it?

[Eddie]

Arms are a bit wierd, they don't really remind me of arms unfortunately. His left trouser leg by his view (on our right in other words) looks reasonably off at the top. He needs the trouser to go inwards rather than straight up into that part of the coat.

I like the hair, it's my favourite part.
Not bad on the shading, arms could be thicker.

Well done all round, glad to see you back.