Contest #7: Commercial

[MnM]

hmm i am Added ! Doing something in flash :P BTW how could i upload a flash movie?

[Bamboori]

seems that i gotta drop out, since i dont have much time for it atm (too many other projects+school) and just did the beginning of the animation.

[Silverthorn]

hmm i am Added ! Doing something in flash :P BTW how could i upload a flash movie?

I think, http://swfcabin.com/ offers a flash hosting service. You might want to try that

[Reaper]

I guess I'm going to lose the sketchy look if I clean it up any more( especially concerning the eyes) and posting it now I might get one or two improvement suggestions, so:

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Don't take this one either.
text blurred, white pixels removed, hair slightly edited and shirt darkened. Anything else to do?
Btw: Creative as hell

[Silverthorn]

Try blending in Davis a little better into the picture. If you have Photoshop, use "Multiply" to overlay him with the background gradient. Makes it look just that much smoother
Also, in case you can, it'd be awesome if you could smudge out the pencil lines. Makes it look less sketchy but more painteresque

[Reaper]

I haven't got Photoshop, but GIMP features Multiply as well. Lol, now I get what I actually should use Layers for. I've got to remember this the next time I do a picture. For this doing a new gradient also works.
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I'm not sure if thats better though. Probably it is, and it's still sketchy enough. Just the texture is weird.
Well, I won't have the time to change more anyway, so this is my final entry.

[Bamboori]

the mouth is blurred too much. otherwise way better

[Simoneon]

You really should unblur that text... Looks crappy for me.
Else is not that bad! Nice work.

[prince_freeza]

in my opinion the text kinda bothers me... "GO AND PLAY LF2 NOW!!!" you make it sound kinda like ur forcing people to play..
but still thats just my opinion dude. its all up to you. oh and plz dont get offended or anything.

[JoshEX]

keeping it, maybe (Click to View)