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My Songs
#1
First i would like to say that i am glad that i am back here....
Second= I have full right's on this song so don't copy them and use them. AT ALL!!!
Me and Angel Adam are coworkers and i am writting him some song's for his new album!

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Little Sexy Btch (Click to View)
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#2
That second one reminds me of... this awesome song..
Good writings I guess, I usually don't listen to rap, but I still find it kewl...
Hope we could get to listen some recordings in the near future :D
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#3
Well, cool that you... post lyrics and all, but no one can even think of how it will actually sound like.
These songs can be either crap or actually pretty nice.
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#4
i agree with Lauli.. i just wrote these, it's on adam to create master piece of that... i know 2nd one reminds on that song but if you compare them you will find manny diffrences....
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#5
yo SWEET HANDS, u posted ur master work....very nice...
thus still not have free time to record em....maybe soon...this summer..
here are my songs that i wrote:
[spoiler=Phone This Girl]
[CHORUS]
whe,whe,when i phone this girl,my whole world.X2
my girl she wanna be,shes so in love with me.
whe,whe,when i phone this girl,my whole world.X2
(oh)she likes me,(yes)she wants me,(ahaa)sais she could never doupt me.

[Verse1]
lets take a ride,when youre by ma side,i start loosin ma mind,youre my sweetheart,you made heart,beat so fast,like when i count my ca$h,youre hot like the model,my only model,i cant wait till tomorrow,when you and me pop a bottle,n swim in the money pool,play with the gold tool,and get crazy there are no rulez.

[CHORUS]
whe,whe,when i phone this girl,my whole world.X2
my girl she wanna be,shes so in love with me.

[VERSE2]
lets play hide n seek,(together),ima catch up on you,and you catch up on me,trip down dont put the blame on me,enter ANGEL play house,make ya get runnin like the mouse,around and round,like the lost in town,come on lets get out,we'll runaway,take ya faraway,and make love,together.

[CHORUS]
whe,whe,when i phone this girl,my whole world.X2
my girl she wanna be,shes so in love with me.

[VERSE3]
im not guilty,you saying that im fhilty,snoof my breath find it all minty,ice on ma neck,diamonds theets what the heck!,check me out from a distance ill be shining,jing bling a ling,how i got this ring,what can i say,well i was walkin,and you know,that happened,and that happened,and hey girl i got you a ring,what do you think?

[CHORUS]
whe,whe,when i phone this girl,my whole world.X2
my girl she wanna be,shes so in love with me.
whe,whe,when i phone this girl,my whole world.X2
(oh)she likes me,(yes)she wants me,(ahaa)sais she could never doupt me.
[/spoiler]
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#6
Yo Adam that was really cool....
here is some random rhyme....


i'm a master, you are slave,
i have castle, you have cave,
i am so filthy rich,
i have b*tch,
your wife's which,
i have money,jevrley, hosues,
and for breakfast yout eat mouses,
i drink wine and eat pork,
while with pig's you have to work,
yea i'm the man, yea that's me,
and just becouse i'm good,
i'll let you go free,
but you will have to pay me fee,
so now girls you can see,
your best husband would be me!


These is it.... i hope you like it, there i more to come.... these rhymes i will maybe use later in some song...
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#7
They're a bit silly, but I see that you can write. ;p
They've a nice rhyme, that's the biggest advantage in your creations. :D

If you somehow could get an inspiration of lyric words of a song - I guess somebody would use it.
Keep it up, I know you will improve. :)
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#8
Hes allready improved...sweet hands is a master of writin....im buyin his lyrics..
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here is one new song i wrote.... soon i'll post some more songs.....


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#10
Man i love this one so much..its nice and its polite...
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