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Marshall · 04-20-2010, 05:31 PM

(04-20-2010, 04:33 PM)YinYin Wrote: wouldve fit the last theme pretty well too

this one looks a lot more exciting than your LouisEX entry

Bamboori · 04-20-2010, 06:33 PM

looks more like an evil genie of the lamp

one of his bracelets seems to be open, you should fix that :P
also the second horn is in a weird perspective (or is it supposed to not be at the same angle as the other one?)
but awesome details

lf2TimmE1 · (This post was last modified: 04-20-2010, 06:38 PM by lf2TimmE1.)

thx for the feedback.

that bravelet is not really open, just the suboptimal placed light effect makes it look that way so i'll gotta change that. the horns are actually supposed to be in different angles but if more people will complain about i'll probably also change it.

YinYin · 04-20-2010, 06:38 PM

(04-20-2010, 05:11 PM)Gad Wrote: Image Ready?
YinYin Ready - Simoneon

image ready

(04-20-2010, 05:31 PM)Marshall Wrote: this one looks a lot more exciting than your LouisEX entry

but EX exing is so absurd i had to do it

SirFrog · (This post was last modified: 04-20-2010, 08:13 PM by SirFrog.)

Alright, embraced BP's critics and I'd like to post a new one.

Warning! Could be considered as gore (Click to View)

Same background story, but made it "fleshier", gorier, and... well, more nasty.
I'm more satisfied with this one, frankly.

Gad · (This post was last modified: 04-20-2010, 09:04 PM by Gad.)

YinYin@
Now it's almost perfect for me. The only thing I'm worried about is his empty body after the evolving.

@Timme1
The smoke looks kinda like a clump, like a twisted cookie, for me.
Also I don't like his right part of chest - it's kinda circular.

@SirFrog
I think you should make his head more detailed and shade the inside-body-part.

Gad · (This post was last modified: 04-20-2010, 10:14 PM by Gad.)

You are right, the previous version is better than this. ;D You made it even more clumpy. For me the "smoke" looks kinda like this:

Spoiler (Click to View)

But it's twisted

.

That's only mine way of thinking, don't forget.

Chishio · 04-20-2010, 10:19 PM

(04-20-2010, 06:38 PM)YinYin Wrote:
(04-20-2010, 05:11 PM)Gad Wrote: Image Ready?
YinYin Ready - Simoneon

image ready

(04-20-2010, 05:31 PM)Marshall Wrote: this one looks a lot more exciting than your LouisEX entry

but EX exing is so absurd i had to do it

Awesome YinYin... simply awesome... but why the heck am I getting a nasty sense of Deja-vu from seeing this?

lf2TimmE1 · (This post was last modified: 04-24-2010, 09:56 AM by lf2TimmE1.)

Summoned by julian from another dimension to bring choas and destruction to the littlefighter world, 'The Lord of Chaos' gathered more and more energy for every killed man. Even Julian began to fear this ability of gathering infinitive power. To stop this creature from getting stronger than anyone else in the universe he had to act as fast as possible. So he teamed up with Firzen and a legion of justins and sorcerers. After a long and bloody fight they finally were able to defeat the mighty creature and enchained it with bewitched bracelets.
But they didn't know that the creature still gathered power from the suffering of all humans. 'The Lord of Chaos' now just waits for the right moment to take revenge on julian and the whole littlefighter world.
(I'm not a good story teller but i hope to compensate that with my sprite

)

Chishio · 04-21-2010, 12:55 AM

You know... some smoke on the limbs (elbows and such) like what you have below the waist might be interesting.

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