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Whoa, seriously!
I like the idea of the blog and everything. But you should really read your text once or twice before you publish.
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totally agree with lauli
first I was like "oh hey, cool, they got a blog and stuff"
but then I read the first entry and was like "wait, whut?"
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Well, gramatically incorrect. But corrected would be great :P
BTW I got a trojan when visiting blog.
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07-04-2010, 07:20 PM
(This post was last modified: 07-04-2010, 09:50 PM by Eddie.)
Hmm, I've sent something to the email to get enrolled in writing the reviews, hopefully it's up to everyone's standards and I hope to bring some news and reviews out to Little Fighter Empire as soon as possible.
As for the current stuff, we really should start checking Grammar. It's looking a bit odd at the moment.
edit:
Shouldn't this be in Little Fighter discussion anyway? Its a Little Fighter newsgroup/letter after all!
One day, I shall become, TUTORIAL-MAN: Superhero of writing overly long, overly annoying tutorials which most people probably won't read, but will give it a stab at the first 5 lines!
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thx for commenting guys...
i just edited ehtanaras post, THX TO SIRIS WHO FIXED GRAMMAR, and i posted his one.... eddie joined to day with his epicly long review...
FROM NOW ON WE NEED SOMEONE TO WORK ON STORIES AND POEMS... so who wanna join send me a story about LF2....
BTW, you could have commented on the blog dirctly, i allowed to comment even if you are not member....
SirisRhazael i'll check that about trojan but i don't think it is possible...
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The current reviews don't really seem like reviews to me anyway :P.
The reason I did a long one is because thats how I see reviews, other than that you just provide the basic selling points of what attacks they have and what abilities they have.
Add a bit of opinion in and some fighting style comments - BAM, with a bit of longer text you can make reviews that are dreams
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If you need someone to help correct grammar and help the reviews make more sense - gimme a shout
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