[ char] Kusari

[betitngoan]

this is my second char
i hope you like it
it will be AWESOME


Att

[XLittlebob252]

hey man i really like it but the att gif is way too fast
but other than that its really amazing design

[oliveryungo]

Breathing sprite- weird pixel appears on his right shoulder, and left shoulder expands for some reason. Also, he doesn't need to breathe that heavily.
Attack sprite- red pixel next to his left shoulder.
Facepic- It seems as if the piccy is from below...
Oh, and please post pictures of the weapons in your poll. It makes it easier for the people who aren't knowledgable in melee weapons.

[~Dome~]

The first attack looks a bit stiffly, his left leg and foot are moving too less in my opinion. it looks like he is just turning his hips and attacks, the flow is missing.

[hell fightter]

and thats what i call char makeying

[Eddie]

As much as both the face picture and the sprites are good... they are not complimentary to each other. It is a consistant issue with your work betitngoan.

From the sprite I see a more aged and angry face. It's also a very round face. Then I look to your sprited face picture... they are not the same person from whatever point of view you look at it. It was the same with the bodybuilding girl. The only one I can honestly say you got spot on or within a decent representation of each other - would be Kenny.

The face picture needs to be rounder, more angry. I mean just look at all of the little fighter characters - you can see the resemblance within the sprites and the face picture. With yours I cannot find that similarity.


I am not trying to put your work down when I say this, I'm trying to broaden the horizons. Look at the way you sprite a character, then look at how you draw the face. If they do not match, they don't look like the same person. If they aren't the same person - they're different characters = REDO.

I know you're going to improve it betitngoan because I know you're one of those people that likes to do art to the best standards that you have.

I shall be watching your work very closely, consider me a friendly advisor.

Now keep up the good work!

Eddie

[Taniaetc]

judging from his attacks, i bet that this is gonna be a waesome char, able to pwn anyone standing on his way.
however, the standing looks like he's going to sit somewhere.
anyways, keep up the awesome work, betit ;D.

[betitngoan]

@Eddie : if you want !!!
but i want my face pic smile !!

they don't look like the same person

thanks !! so i think i must change face pic


i hope you happy


@ weapon : KUSARI -GAMA ( Mr . KUSARI )




or the VIDEO :http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q8lIRXe_aiQ

[Ragor]

lolwutgijoe? Looks good (GIJOE!!!!!!)

[oliveryungo]

Just noticed something else-
Shouldn't his right leg be moving forward instead of backward? Try to do it yourself (imaginary, of course). The front part of your foot should be pivoting and leaning forwards, instead of stepping back.