Dnilb sprites

[Dnilb]

One of my first pixel arts, shading is not done yet, I posted it to know if the proportions and other stuff seem alright.

In my opinion hair is weird, any advice how to improve it?

[Gad]

Not nad for start. Still, you could use some video tutorials on Youtube.

[Dnilb]

Tried something smaller:

[Marko]

I don't like position of the nose in first picture. It should be more on right because is 3/4 view.
About hair.. headband is too tight (don't know different word to describe it) and that makes you head above forehead to small.. that automatically makes hair looks too small as well.

really quick edition to show you what i am talking about:
Red is how the head seems to look like, green is how i think it should look like from this point of view.


If you were drawing hair considering head is like green lines, it would look just fine.

Other than that, very promising drawings

[Dnilb]

New ones:

Ceafan:



Walc


Garou

Gif of the making:

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Genos

Gif of the making:

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[Gad]

love your style

[Marko]

you are very talented

[Dnilb]

Updated Genos:


Trying out animations:

[Jahvansi]

looking good man, keep it up

[Dnilb]

New ones, trying to set up style for a possible 2d game in the future:



Does anything look odd, needs improvments?