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[character] fury
#1
This char is still under construction and here is the first sprite:
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I know i'm a suck spriter so comment please.
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#2
the legs are looking weird an too big
And he looks like an Disco-hip-hop-checker-i-am-the-best-in-da-house-bunny-checker-yo-man

does he really fight with that shirt?
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#3
how about this:
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#4
the right thing at his legs is a bit to small
and the red at his arms looks to weak also at the shoes
Is he a kind of ninja or a knight?
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#5
the first one remembers me a bit of apocalipsis lfo-davis, sure you made it by yourself?
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#6
@lf2-hacker: how about now:
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@~dome~: I took the jeans from lfo-davis
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#7
I don't get what that brown-ish line on the left side is. At the coat. It doesn't fit right there...
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#8
yeah but still the right legs thingy is to small
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(11-09-2008, 11:47 AM)Lf2-hacker Wrote:  yeah but still the right legs thingy is to small
It's supposed to be small i guess ;P

Oh and you should really change his head, it reminds to much at woody
(Probably because it is woody rolleyes )
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(11-09-2008, 11:29 AM)no one Wrote:  [Image: 6d6c663abcb767d4c406bbb81671e76e.bmp]
i like this body best - nice color theme and shapes
however you should also create/cut together a new head instead of having a woody with a different dress
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