[Char] Mattie (rate)

[XSasukeXS]

here is my new char and if you like it ill continue with it if you dont like it and have tips for me ill still continue and if you dont like i will not continue




rate!

[Ascor]

the font is unrealistic

[Bamboori]

looks like a justin ni normal clothes...
add more shading to it and redraw the legs (they just look weird)

[Gad]

Bad leg shading, no arms shading visible, the font is weird and too big. Mask is copied from julian/justin.

I think you should repair this.

[Silverthorn]

1: The name should look like it's stuck on the shirt, right? make it a little more "wavy". At the moment, the font doesn't look like it's embedded on the shirt, so you need to make it more adhered by moving pixels rows up/down and left/right.
2: Spend a little time on the shading, the hair looks flat, like the shirt, hands, and pants.
3: There's that weird bump in the pants on knee-height.
4: A few pixels of the "base pants" (which I'd identify as Woody's) are visible between the legs. Time to remove them.

That's it so far, I guess.

[The Lost Global Mod]

come on guys say something positive too.

i like the hair. for the first time it is a good try. you improve, keep it up and you will become an professional someday.

[Guigs]

Yeh! You're trying! That's a begging!
now for the tips, don't use fonts on shirts, cause will be a pain in the a** to do in the moves, and hes legs are too big. make it more proportional.

By the way, wich program do you use?

[Hukko]

The head is ok, but the body isn't good.

[XSasukeXS]

im using paint and thanks 19POtt92

[Zanshin]

You could try it with Photofiltre/Studio or Photoshop or whatever.

But please dont continue like that.