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No this is no new Project since I have 2.

Just a little sprite for training, base was dennis
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+Like those trousers!
+Good hairstyle

-Looks a bit...plain.
-Work on that shading
-His face looks really empty

But good one anyway!
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nice, except those weird stripes on his legs

edit: damn you, sirfrog, you were faster XD
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hmmm, I'm not too fond of that kind of hair shading, sorry. It has too less detail for me...

Also, the face could need some more shading, it's a little plain at the moment. The rest looks fine except for the left shoe (from our perspective the right); it's a little short. The pants look quite..... unusual :P I like them, although I'd never wear those.... oh well..... :D /off-topic

Yea, so if you're happy with the amount of detail (in the end it's the creator who decides when to stop), this is a really great sprite! IMO you could add something to the jacket, for example some buttons, to make it look less plain. But that's your decision ;)
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^- oh sry I deleted the old post, to not spam at the same time you posted :D

here we go
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And just a try :)
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he is holding the string of the bow?
and whats the white thing on his jacket?
overall, like like him, maybe without the bow i think.
and get rid of the stripes. but you need something to make this char more individual. not a weapon though. you'll think of something i bet.
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I like the chars on this one. Bow and arrow is to wierd and out-of style in this frame. A fight type outa be nice suited for him. Energy powers or fire will look good. Everything else is good except for the lines on his pants. Wierd but new style/fashion.cool
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Yeah he is holding the string... Anyways a bow? I don't like it (opinion) Maybe a long sword, or...a club XD
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But you know, you should give him a new and unique weapon, that nobody have used before. (But don't take the flail, it's mine XD)
So here: List of medieval weapons on Wikipedia
In case it helps :P
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How about .... an dagger?

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