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quite nice but
deep´s arms look not very strong and the girl looks a bit like a boy
12-27-2008, 09:58 PM
Sorry, but Freeze looks like an emo xD
Otherwise your artworks are not bad
12-28-2008, 07:15 AM
Not bad of an artwork self-made that's what I like.
Sorry to say but there's some stuff which look pretty wierd. 1. U kinda messed up on freeze's hair style and colour. 2. Poor arm musceles on deep. He'll get beaten up by an ant with these arms! ![]() 3. That girl looks like a boy. Still, excellent work and keep trying!
12-28-2008, 07:46 AM
Freeze's hair is ...different, and the eye is too small. Yeah...deep needs muscles...
The girl? oh, c'mon It's fine. BTW nice artwork, keep practising
If at first you don't succeed, you're probably not going skydiving again.
12-28-2008, 10:29 AM
Why do you scribble so much, even with a tablet?
It looks ways nicer if you have a little fatter and clear outline. Or no outline would look also nice.
12-29-2008, 05:18 AM
Much, much better, thoug the pther arm looks funny
If at first you don't succeed, you're probably not going skydiving again.
12-29-2008, 04:55 PM
that girl looks very boyish :P
you don't want to see this (Click to View) the other by xFire
12-30-2008, 09:29 AM
If at first you don't succeed, you're probably not going skydiving again.
12-30-2008, 02:14 PM
the last one you posted is my favorite, that's for sure. The other three are somehow.... dunno.... not quite appealing to me....
Try drawing clear lines, I know it's hard but the result looks much better
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