[Omi]ryouken_x

[ryouken_x]

hey everyone......this is my 1st time...
this is my character omi from xiaolin showdown
please comment n suggest any improvements


*edited the bump and blurred the shadows....

[sadbhav]

you gonna make a char out of this??
the shoes look small, like his feet are small and the right hand (his left) looks strange.
but nice for first time though

[Cerberus]

it looks good but i think u have to blur the difference between light and shadow. and there is a bump on his head, i would cut it
but all in all it looks good

[ryouken_x]

it looks good but i think u have to blur the difference between light and shadow. and there is a bump on his head, i would cut it
but all in all it looks good

forgot to blur it....and ya....even i noticed the bump...will work on that too...

[imbql]

sweet sprite dude keep it up

[zero_legends]

Nice average char and pic ( whatever u call it ) but if you're gonna make a char out of it , you're gonna have to improve these.


1. Not LF2 size. To big.

2. Poor pixels and details doesn't suit LF2.

3. His face looks like pacman xD

Nice work dude but fix these three things to make it an LF2 char.

[chase123]

it is very good for a first try.

[ryouken_x]

Nice average char and pic ( whatever u call it ) but if you're gonna make a char out of it , you're gonna have to improve these.


1. Not LF2 size. To big.

2. Poor pixels and details doesn't suit LF2.

3. His face looks like pacman xD

Nice work dude but fix these three things to make it an LF2 char.

1.i resized him...so everyone can him better
here is the original pic.....

2.ok....will improve the pixels....n can u please tell what do u mean by "details doesn't suit LF2"....
3.i know what u mean about the face....but he really looks like that...

[KaywonnJuto]

Wow, not bad...
Great copy, I watch that show sometimes...over the weekend
keep up the good work
but better change his eyes, they look weird...(thats all I'm saying...)
Keep it up though...

[Silverthorn]

oh, now I remember him! I freaking loved the series

You should decide: make him like in the original with a giant head or more with lf2-proportions. Regardless of this, at the moment he looks a little chubby, and he isn't in original, so you might wanna remove some "extra-baggage" from him. Also, the body is turned too much to the viewer, while the head is turned like it should. Check on how the body should be turned