[char] Kaywonn (supposed to repressent the maker)

[KaywonnJuto]

This is what I made in a few minutes...

plz comment...
I want to make this into a real char...
I'm really undesided on how should I make his clothes...
I wanted to do like a really punk or gothic look...

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Do u think I should add in my cigarette?
It looks preatty stupid...
(not going to post until I get it right...)
(so - far all I see is Ciggars - which are much bigger and easier...)
(so ~ yeah - ciggars don't help...)
(any advise if i do add in a cigarette?)

[Magnamancy]

Ok,
The head looks quite nice

As for the clothes,
what do you wear most often?
combine that with your preference of punk and/or goth.
Its what I did for my character^^

As for the cigarette...
My honest advice;
If you smoke, quit.
Its not endearing, and at any rate I would recommend leaving it off your character.

I'm not trying to be harsh/mean, and I'm sorry if I offend you.

But I like the way your character looks so far
And I'm definitely interested in the final product

[Felix EX]

Nice head
and i dont think it needs any improvements

One more thing, i dont like ciggars

[prince_freeza]

well the head looks nice but why dont u finishe it??
from the looks of it i think he will be a dark char dont u?
P.S.no cigarets belive me.

[Lauli]

I'd go for a cigar. In the game.

If he takes out one while standing for some time it'll look nice. But please, by all means, don't include the smoke and everything else in the chars sprites.

[Angel_Adam]

why dont u make a move.. like the char takes out a cigar and he blows the smoke with his mouth and the enemy burns or faints what ever u want :d.

[lf2TimmE1]

like it so far..but u should shade the hair

[Angel_Adam]

and u should make it more spikey.

[Zanshin]

Or for smoking you could make something like this http://www.lf-empire.de/lfev9/en/lf2-emp...man-effect

[Angel_Adam]

nice work zanshin. u r really creative.
i played rayman. i think if the char should smoke a cigar when standing and he regains his mana power in every smoke.